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Reviews for: Mocha Wolves
Claire
2005-03-27 . chapter 1
That was great! I loved how tangible and layered the imagery was, and your writing has such style! I like the way you phrase your ideas. Please write us more!
Elizabeth Robbins
2005-01-03 . chapter 1
Please get a basic grammar book and review sentence structure and paragraphs. This is very difficult to read.
Snowfire the Kitsune
2003-12-21 . chapter 1
Great start! I'm a fan of animal mindspeech, too! Have you read any Mercedes Lackey or Tamora Pierce books? If you like wolves and dogs in particular, I suggest that you read 'Wild Magic' by Tamora Pierce. I can hardly wait to read more of your story!
Sending mischief your way!
Snowfire the Kitsune
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