This is the DRAGON BALL section this story belongs in the DRAGON BALL Z section. Dragon Ball means

Chibi Goku, Teen Bulma, Teen Yamcha, Oolong, Puar, Pilaf, Mai, Shao/Shu, Roshi, Turtle, Tien, Chaot-zu, Launch, King Piccolo, Piccolo's minions, Ma Junior, ect

Dragon Ball Z is for all the people Dragon Ball Z and GT characters

Goku, Vegeta, Piccolo, Cell, Frieza, Hell Fighter 17, Buu, Uub, ect

very good end! very very nice story! hope you write more like this one! please read my story!
_ amy85 _ Merry Xmas to you and all!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!-!

This was a really nice Christmas story. Expeacsially because it's over, for the most part. So reading this was a nice jump back into the season and the feeling. I'm not blue about it. - MERRY CHRISTMAS PANNY-CHAN!

Two great chapters for the price of one. I liked both chapters. It was nice. Will you be adding more, or is this the end? I hope that there's more, because I'm really beggining to like this fic of yours. Great job.

I like it. I can't wait to read Trunks POV. This is very different, and I like how you display everyone's POV'S. That's different. Please continue. I'd like to see where this is going. Good job

Well this chapter is not my favourite, but is quite nice! please keep updating!( look I have this first story and... *hint,hint*)
_ amy _

Looks like I'm the only one reading it! I have to tell you that is very good! Is a little depressing when only a person reviews ( I know because only few people review my story!), but I'm sure more peolpe will read it later on!
_amy _

will love bloom for Trunks and Pan I hope yes , I think they make a splandid couple! can't wait to know what will happen!
_ AMY _

COOL STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! AND PLEASE READ MY STORY!
_AMY_