nice story! I loved the Harm/civilian and Mac/Jag slant of your story.

Another great story.. I shouldnt be surprised though.. Hoep your surgery goes well.. You could def. make this into an awesome series! I look forward to your return to great writting...

great story.

Good chapter. Write more soon.

Very cute story! I love how the characters are in a different 'life', it makes for a fun change! :)

Double-agent,ha,how cute. Nice ending!

I hope surgery goes well for you. I'm delighted with the happy ending. Thanks for writing this story.

Aww...That was so cute. Adorbable...

That was so good! I hope everything goes well with the surgery and when you're up to it again, I would definitely like to see some continuation! Good job!
e-dog

Hehe, office pool! This is fantastic. I wish that you'd update more often though. Keep 'em coming though, cos I love this story!

LOL, loved the last line :D. One request, since the story has somewhat long periods of time in between chapters, do u mind writing longer chapters? That's all that is bugging me :). Story's great!
sancti

haha...he won the office pool! I really do love hannah. she's so cute! anywho, nice update and looking forward to the next part!
e-dog

Good chapter, Write more soon,

great story.

I really like this story and hope that you will continue it. I also like the way you approched the story,it's unique and refreshing. Please update soon.