GAH! Update soon! Please!
I love the part when Enkidu flaps his ears...and when Daggerhorn gets drunk...
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So please... Update soon. I've been prowling the Ultimate Muscle section waiting for you to update...

*eyes are shiny with tears* Aw... The lil guy's just SO cute! ^_^ It's from a whole different perspective. I love your story, your writing style-- It's simple, yet informative, and the pace neither too fast or too slow.
...I wants him. *HUGGLES LIL' GAZELLE MAN* Aw... So... CUTE...!
Yeek! More, more, more, you have to write some more!

My favorite part of this chapter was the comment about Daggerhorn's love handle:"This is where I store the love for my son" Hilarious. I can't shake the feeling that your going to kill off Daggerhorn or Lionardo or both...

Dageerhorn...stop being an idiot. hits Daggerhorn with rolled up newspaper.
I'm really starting to like Lionardo. Too bad I can't shake the feeling he'll be dead by the fic's end.

finally got off my butt and updated...
Oh poor Daggerhorn...he just can't win. We all know he's going to fail..

It's official; I love Daggerhorn. Bawling over little Enkidu's ambitions, plotting to make his son a lead a peaceful life, having his revenge on Lionardo like that... *sighs* Please say you're writing more on him in later chapters?
Oh, and speaking of Lionardo, it's a relief he's staying a good guy. For a while, you had me worried he'd pull a Tamerlion and eat someone. O_o *shudders*

You did a great yet intentionally vague description of the Warsman Vs. Ramenman match. I really like that kind of stuff in Fan Fiction.
The descriptions were great, as always. Also, you developed the story pretty well, considering the length of this chapter.
Great job!

Now we know where Endiku got the name "Gazelleman".
Little Endiku souns like such a cute kid.
Aw. he want to be just like Daddy...but Daddy faints at that idea.

Poor Daggerhorn...we all know that little Endikugoing to have far from a "peaceful life".
I like Lionardo. I also must express my concerns that I hope he doesn't turn out to be another "Tamerlion" (I only recently got the wordplay on his name.)

Poor Daggerhorn he has no wife...poor little Endiku he has no mommy...Are you going to do fanart of little baby Endiku?

I guess Daggerhorn wasn't ready to hear that. Let's just hope he doesn't block Enkidu's road to success.
Nice descriptions and storyline. I could read this a thousand times without getting bored of it.

WAR!
Is it me or Chojin war tales are becoming popular? Just kidding, though I'm really hoping to see some uprisings being quelled.

Very nicely written! It held my attention, made me want to read more. Is Lionardo an original character? (Dumb question, probably. XP) Poor Daggerhorn, it was the one thing he didn't want to hear coming out of his son's mouth. Excellent job! Welcome back to the fanfiction game! XD I look forward to the upcoming chapters!

Aww... Words can't describe how adorable this fic is. Okay, maybe they can, but I don't know which words they are and what order they're in. Anyway, I loved reading the first chapters about Daggerhorn; his reaction to Enkidu's ambition to become a Chojin was priceless. Oh, and Enkidu's as cute as a button, too. ^_^
One thing, though. I just hope Lionardo doesn't turn into another Tamerlion. O_o