great chapter i cant wait to read the next one

Another Amazing chapter! Although, I must admit, it's [left me with a few questions. However, I'm sure they'll be answered soon enough. If not in the next chapter or two, then I'll just ask in my review. As always, can't wait to see what'll happen next!

This is really good, I'm not one to review on every chapter. But this is very good, and I can't wait till the new chapter please update soon.
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Hi I like this chapter and the talk between the king and queen was interestingwho's hte granson they talking about, and what is inside the box to sammy give to Serena, well please continue, bye.

please write more of this story

Great chapter! I wish i could write like that. Very long chapter, update soon. Btw what is going on w/ Beryl (Donkey)? is the person talking to her the head of the nega verse?

that was one long convo
great chapter please update soon

wow! excellent chapter! so much happened in it... *frowns* evil cliff hanger evil! *attacks cliff hanger with large wooden stick* ahh that made me feel so much better *sits back down in chair* now i will sit here and wait until next chapter is posted...still sitting...sitting *eyes start dropping* s i t t i n g...*snore* wakes up hours later *wipes off droll from keyboard* what u didn't expect me to stay awake while i was sleeping did you...oh u did? well i can't stay awake for ever...anyway great chapter u guys! ^_^ update soon

Hi i like this chapter and about Serena and Darien be parent's that's great please continue i want to read more, bye.

WOW! That was an amazing chapter! Sorry if my last review seemed a little impatient, I didn't mean to sound that way. I absolutely loved this chapter! I thought the ending was the best. Can't wait for the next the next installment...don't worry, I'll be patient...lol.

I really really really really hope you're going to update this soon! I'm going crazy wondering what's going to happen!

I've relly enjoyed your story so far. I especailly liked how Serena & Darien found out about each other and how it led to Serena's family finding out her secret. Can't wait to find out how it ends.

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