 MochaCocaFan 7/25/08 . chapter 1Very angsty. |
 miarae 4/15/04 . chapter 1Wow...this was so good! I totally loved this story! it was dark but still with a bit of hope. I still think Riley was the best boyfriend ever and your story just proved my point! Please write more beautiful stories like this! Your descriptions are exceptionally beautiful! |
 Quicksilver19 1/25/04 . chapter 1Aw... cute story! keep it up! :) |
 Anna 12/28/03 . chapter 1 This story is really good. I think you have really captured how much Riley loves Buffy. A very good insight into Rileys mind and very well written. |
 Forget Yesterday 12/22/03 . chapter 1I like this. It's very well-written, and is neither "Grr, I hate Riley" nor "I want to have Riley's babies so I'm going to make him perfect".
Realistic stuff going on in his head. I like the way you write. |
 Queen Boadicea 12/17/03 . chapter 1This is an interesting sight into Riley's mind. You make him human and personable. A lot of fans don't like him. Well, that's a bit of an understatement. They hate him and I was right on board with that. But compared to a bleached blonde vampire who slaughtered people throughout Europe he looks pretty good. Your story shows what a decent, upstanding guy he was. |