Brill story! I think that the end was quite sad though because shadow ends up staying in the house, and doesn't remember anything. Hope you write other good stories like this soon! Kudos to you, kudos to you indeed!

WHAT?! Shadow in the end becomes evil then eats everyone including Sonic, Knux, Ames, Tails, etc.!!? I hate this ending.

OMG! You made Shadow at Maria! Not only is that sik but sad!And exactly how big is he? OMG!The shock is too much! WAH! I want a happy ending wit Sonic an others! And maybe Maria! I knew this would happen, but not him eating her! I still think its a great story but maybe you chose the wrong guy for the eating job! Why couldnt you make knucles eat people instead of Shadow? Sorry, Im getting out of hand. I think its an emotonal sad story,a little too sad but i still thik its great.

Ok... Ending part about shadow transforming's a little weird but I guess it's posible...

Wow! Great story so far! But I don't think I can read all 17 chapters. And I hope Shadow hurrys up to learn how to read, talk, teleport, use a gun, sorry that comes after maria's dead. Anyway I luv this story!

this story was great and all, but why did Shadow have to kill Maria? When he had the flashbacks of him and Maria, I cried. I loved how you used imagination about Shadow and the teenagers though. I'm not trying to be rude, but if you do create another story, try not to have that much blood in it. But, if that's the way you are with writing, I respect that. remember this line,
"Bring hope to humanity"
Great Story.

awsome, simply awsom. thank you for finishing it!

This chapter was so sad...*sniff* This is an amazing story! It goes into your Crimson Vision story too.

This was so sad and wonderful at the same time, it fits perfectly into your Crimson story! Poor Shadow, I like how you did the end, a poem just like Crimson. Waah!! Maria always has to die, doesn't she? ;_;!

I loved it... It was so kewl... actually it was awsome... So hurry up.. please and right another chapter! Tootles... Good luck with your next chapter...

Aw! What a really sad ending to chapter 15! *cries* I can't believe that Shadow killed Maria. I agree this chapter was a little 'gruesome' but it was very cool and well-written! I loved it! ^_^ *shrieks* I LOVE IT! *ahem* Well, yeah. This story has come a long way and it's one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Well done Iris Sweetheart, please keep up the great work! ^_^
~Dark Evrae~

OH..MY..GOD.. O_O Ma..ria! I'm crying right now you know! :_: lol! This is a very powerful story.. please continue!

I've never read any Shadow vampire fics before, being queasy little me. However, since I'm so into this story, even after I knew what was coming, I kept reading.
This story really does live up to Crimson Vision. Definitely.
Only problem I have is with the typos. It's a little jogging to be into a scene then read a typo. But it's a quick fix.
Also...I don't think this story is PG anymore.

Great story. I hope this isn't the last chapter.

Wow, this is such an amazing story! Shadow was quite sweet when he was first created! ^^ Very cool, this story is going straight into my favs and I'll read more when I get the time! (I'm kinda busy right now... -_-) Great story! ^^