I love when characters are being stupid. It makes me want to punch them.

nice!! I was wondering how Harry was going to get out!

You just *had* to pull a disappearing act after finishing this story on a cliffhanger, didn't you?

I've not had time to do more than save the story to my hard drive, but I was wondering when the next installment will be up?

I think I got your attention with my nickname . . . huh? Well I'm guessing you want my review, so I'll give it to you straight. It was good, Harry trusted Voldie a little too quickly at the beginning though. I also . . . kinda got annoyed that Harry didn't just TELL Ron why he had to take the doses of Mind Snare. Say that he was foced the potion by Death Eaters and was taking doses to stop the withdraw. Would've saved you and Harry ALOT of trouble.

Harry: Oh yeah, like that would work out well! -Scarcasm-

Me: HEY! I just, ya know, feel bad for Ron. He was only worried.

Harry: Yeah, locking someone in a room because they were "WORRIED" . . . WHY HADN'T I BLOODY THOUGHT OF THAT?! Maybe, next time you start acting weird, I'll lock you in a closet! SEE IF THAT FIXES THINGS!

Me: Geeze . . . for a figment of my imagination, your harsh.

Harry: Says the girl whose talking to herself.

Voldemort: HE'S A GIRL?!

Me: Hm? Long hair, pink cloths, and a skirt? GEEZE! HOW DID YOU KNOW HARRY?! I thought I LOOKED like a boy!

Voldemort: It was your nickname . . . why do you think I assumed that?!

Me: A -Snickers- BOY?! Eh HAHAHAHAHAHA! What BOY would have YAOI fansights on his bookmarks?! Tell me that Moldy-Shorts? HM?

Voldemort: . . . Good point. HEY! WAIT! WHATS THIS ABOUT MOLDY-SHORTS?! I'M LORD VOLDEMORT! NOT THIS MOLDY-SHORTS! I AM THE MASTER OF DARKNESS, THE MASTER OF MASTERS, THE-

Harry: OKAY! OKAY! WE GET IT! Sheesh . . .

Me: Well, that's for my review! Good fanfic! Later! -Poofs Away-

Good fanfic, decided to read it till 4 AM (I'm an insomiac . . . the last time I actually slept was . . . well . . . a WEEK ago! Sometimes, I wish dreamless sleep potions were real -.- . . . -sigh-). Can't wait for the sequel . . . and it looks like I won't be sleeping till sunrise . . . -sigh-. Wonder how long before that writers block of yours clears up? I know what you mean, mine lasts for months at a time now and again. Ya know, I have a trick that really helps destory writers block, even if it gets you to only write a single chapter . . . I wonder, will it help? Oh well, it's worth a shot. Of course, you know that brain storming crap teachers are constantly nagging you about? Well the method actually helps! Shocking? Not really! Apperently it only works if it's something you WANT to do (like if you had to brainstorm an essay on the history of sheos . . . well . . . you'd just want to get it over with and use the nearest information with the LEAST amount of thinking possible.). Here's an idea for a future fanfic I'm posting that I based off an anime show I saw online called Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni (This is going to be a future fanfic called "When the Demons Cry" . . . though I won't be posting until I have the second chapter finished.):

Alright, you probably never seen Higurashi, so I might have to explain a few things (Woopie . . . -rolls eyes- Don't mind me . . . I'm just in a bad mood cuse' I can't sleep like NORMAL people. GAH! I'm becoming too much like L . . .). The show is all crime, murder, blood, death, gore (This anime should come with a viewer discression advisory . . .), and phsyco killer teenage girls (The world has gone mad!). This is an example . . . so ignore the rest if you want. I'm just giving you some of my ideas to help with yours. Anyway, a new child is moving into the village of Hanimzawa (Not sure I spelled it right . . . it's Japanese, go figure. Those people have the oddest, yet for some reason coolest, names in my opinion.), which will be Harry, who has come to live with the Dursleys after being sent from orphanage to orphanage. He spends a year in the area and is commonly abused by his relatives, while sneaking away to go into a junk yard where he looks for new toys and useful items to help his own survival. One day he meets two people from outside the village (Remus and Tonks), who take positions into the village to watch over Harry. Though, when Remus and Tonks begin to mettle in the past murders that occured in a curtain pattern within the village, they were killed for revealing to Harry the information to the murders (which the murderers where thought to be the entire village). Now here's a side-story that will help you understand better. This village was said to be protected by a being that went by the name of Oroshiro-sama, who was said to be gardian of the village. Of course, the village has a festival to worship this being called the coton drifting ceremony. It is there where you take a ball of coton at the end of the festival and let it drift down the river so Oroshiro-sama will wash away your sins. But that's not why I'm telling you this . . . oh no . . . it's the ritual that is done before the cotton is handed out is interesting. In this ritual the shrine maidain of the shrine (Forgot the name . . . uurge! I'll look it up later), was to take an axe, and chop the coton from within the bag. But why am I telling you this? Well let's just say it gets more interesting. In the past, apperantly, instead of cotton, they used a LIVE human sacrifice. Hanimzawa was a village of demons, and of course, every year during the cotton drifting ceremony, a sacrifice was given to Oroshiro-sama, who was their apparent "god". They would continue to chop the axe until nothing was left but a bloody mess and the remains were eaten by the demons as a feast. That's what the ritual was based off of. Of course, thats not why Tonks in Remus (who was playing the roles of the actual characters) mettled in. Apparently, every year, the day after the cotton drifting ceremony . . . a outsider to the village was found dead the next day. Remus and Tonks, chose to mettle to find out behind these murders, yet before they chould get the full story, Remus was found dead after the cotton drifting ceremony, and Tonks had vainished in thin air (Apperantly, in this form of murder, the men are the ones found dead, while the women disapear . . . never to be found again.). Harry realizes he's in danger and becomes worried since he knew he could be killed for being an "outsider", so in panic, Harry quickly becomes suspiciouse of his classmates (or more specifically, Dudleys gang since the murders directly invovled each gang members' parents, which all found dead at some point after the cotton drifting festival . . . all execpt for Dudley's family of course.) and he begins to worry. He secretly reports to the cheif investiagtor of these murders who contacted him for his own safety (who . . . I don't know yet . . . Dumbledore is too old for this part, though.), while Harry begins to hear things he never though before, and notices odd changes within his classmates when he asked about the murders. Then, one day he finds the name of "Tom Riddle" crossed out on a locker. Harry asks a fellow classmate who he is, and one of the members of Dudleys gang tells him he was a student. When Harry asks what had happend . . . well, a quote may be easier . . . "Tom . . . "trasfered" away. I wouldn't want you to "transfer" as well, Harry . . . you shouldn't get too invovled." . . . or it was something along those lines. One day, Dudley attacks him with an intent to kill, and when Harry finds out nobody decided to help him (rules of the village, the whole village will band together and attack their prey.), he finds a bat that he uses to protect himself with. When one of the youngest members of the gang tell him that the bat belonged to Tom Riddle, and Harry had been acting alot like him before he "transfered" (As in, he was practicing swinging the bat so he could protect himself). Of course, then the member warns him to not loose the bat, notmater what the others say, and mentions something of not wanting Harry to "share the same fate."

AND CUT!

Sorry, I'm not going to spoil the rest. It's almost sunrise. But if you want to watch the anime show, go on animefreak.tv . . . the scroll down on the list of shows and look for Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni. My advice, if your not into horror, or gore, and watching blood and murder makes you sick . . . don't watch it. Trust me when I say anime may be nothing like "real" life . . . but sometimes . . . it may have the same effects as the REAL situation. I hope this inspired you! Of course, you welcomed to use my idea and make a crossover. I'm replacing ALL the characters, just in a different plot. You can just replace Harry as the main character and use all the same characters that appeared throughout the anime. WOW! LONGEST REVIER EVER! Hoped I helped! Ja-ne (Bye)!

Good story. This is the first story I've read where Voldemort/Tom has split personalities. Really interesting idea.

I think Harry got to trusting Voldemort/Tom at the beginning of the story too quickly. Either that or you didn't explain his reasoning enough.

I don't really get why Harry's feeling bad or their plan to make him better that was at the end of this story. Must be some psychology thing I don't get.

It ended rather suddenly, but now that I think about it, it does seem like the end of a saga and the beginning of another in one of those stories that go on and on and on. I wonder how the next story is? You're a great writer and should keep on writing whatever you do.

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Loved the story. I have never read one where Voldermort was an evil spirit that would take over a host; that was a really neat idea.

I'm guessing it's Lucius. Harry should break out the Muggle way LOL

Is Snape going to reopen the Duelling Club? I hope so. About time Harry told them all to sod off. I'm very surprised he hasn't hexed someone yet. Maybe he should just take a really, really long shower. lol :)

Lucius can dream on if he thinks he can take on Harry and the Dark Lord - the most powerful wizard in existance. He'll squash Lucius like my mum does snails.

I've always liked Harry with longer hair.

He seems so much more carefree living with Tom and Matthew, it's a nice change. I like Snape and Harry's new relationship. It's much better than it used to be. :)

Harry is being a bit dense lol. If they wanted to kill him then why would they heal him? Daft boy. :)

Dudley is such a prat. It's his parents fault though for the way they have brought him up. I bet he'll ned up in jail someday.
Poor Harry. Which Death Eater was it?

Love your story, but is there any progress on the sequel yet?