you are too good...

Heya, this was really good! All the details of the communication levels etc was so well thought out - loved it. Plus the Snape/Hermione interaction was so sweet :).

The ending was classic snark...loved it.

A lovely story. And with a happy ending. Which always makes me happy, because I'm a big sap. ) But, I was left wondering where Snape was for a week. I would love to know...

A lovely story. And with a happy ending. Which always makes me happy, because I'm a big sap. ) But, I was left wondering where Snape was for a week. I would love to know...

Turning Point is well done - the characters are pretty much in character, the story's fascinating to read, and I enjoyed it... Nice piece of writing.
Tracey

stuck? well that sucks...you could always have the opposition rise up against the voldermort crowd...make Neville the minister of magic and have Hermione and Snape...aka Audra and David fall head over heals inlove and ride off into the sunset happily married to have babies. I like your story plot. your a good storyteller.

Hm...not a terribly original premise, but then again, they mostly aren't nowadays...wonderful writing, though, very in-character for what I would imagine them to be like, after Voldemort takes over and half of them flee to the Muggle world..
I say you just end it the way you feel that is right. I mean, it doesn't just have to be TWO parts, it could be...ahem...three...or four... )

I don't review very often, but felt that I had to with your story because it is very, very good. I'm impressed with the SS HG interaction, it's actually not as OOC as you might think, I agree that their situation has shaped their personalities. Your Snape in particular is very true.
Just a tiny word of warning (not intended as a criticsm!): be careful of using overtly American words (sidewalk, tardy) if you are aiming for some authenticity. The Potterverse is British, JKR would probably use 'pavement'!
I hope you become unstuck soon, as I'm hoping for a speedy update!