This is well done, but you do know you spelled Ryou wrong several times.

nice

I'm on a reviewing SPREE! _ Okay, I loved the line, "It was interesting, but Otogi nearly got whiplash from constantly going from leader to follower and back again." It sort of summed up the story for me, I guess. Interesting idea. Very interesting.

Interesting.
I really really really really want to see an update on 'The Egypt Game'.
Please?

ah, it's true -_- That stuff was short but good. There wasn't an excess of words in there, just enough to get the point across... if that made sense...and ya fit the lyrics in there really well, and the title... does that mean they were dancin to polka music? XD
People should write more Otogi/Ryou or /Bakura fics... But I'm mostly alone in that fandom -_-