Hi, this is a great story, very well written, I love the idea and how you developed the characters. And if your still there, please do continue this, I would love to read how you finish this story.

-Thanks for a great story :)

please update! i love your rogue! you plan to pair her up with someone?))

plz update, okay? your story's damn interesting, the plot is cool, i wish i thought of it earlier :) you have great writing style, too!

Hey this is a great story. Poor Rogue though, and poor Forge, are they gonna make him rebuild the chamber? You have to write more. Pretty please write more! Bitte! (german for please) This is way good, and I've got no problem being a beta reader. I really want to see what happens next this is such a good story. I can't stop feeling sorry for Rogue though, she's my favorite character. Please write more.

i love this story, you are a great writer who understands the characterisitcs of these characters and then you work with it. you did not change them to fit you story. your version of the story is also plausible. the decisions they make are realistic.

questions:

why does wolfbane hate rogue?

will apocalypse do anything to rogue, will he make advances when he gets his young body back?

does rogue recognize Forge, she has met him why doesn't she recognize him?

i enjoy it write more!

will you ever continue Had A Bad Day Again? that was just getting good(with the brit agent) and then you end it.

Love your story. How you put Apocalypse this last chapter, well he gave me goosebumps! Can't wait for the next chapter!

why isnt rogue with the xmen?

ALSO FINISH PLEASE

Hey! Really enjoyed it, and really hope you update again soon. This is still one of my favs. Later _

Man. I just about had a heart-attack when I got the alert for this chapter. It's a been a helluva wait. But my oh my, was it worth it. I literally couldn't stop reading it. It was that good.

First off...we're getting more of a picture what's going on, a sense of history, and where the story's going. It's basically just starting to coalesce. In the previous chapters, there were a lot of questions but little background to base them on. Now slowly things are starting to make sense. Not in the plot as a whole, mind you. I'm still rabidly asking questions at every step of the way. ;) But it's just staring to feel 'whole' now, if you know what I mean.

I loved the structure of the chapter. Very effective, and the flashbacks and memories are part of the plot, which makes it easier to understand and much classier. It just flows really well. I was glad to see a great deal of Rogue and her background in this chapter. So her and Logan hit the road? And the X-Men were searching for them/her? Needless to say, I'm wondering why.

Great characteriszation. Your describing of each of the characters was rich and detailed and I felt that each of them were personalities in their own right. I especially liked the mutual element of suspicion between Apocalypse's cronies. It only stands to reason, but there seems to be far more going on beneath, and each has their own personal agenda. can't wait to see how that pans out. I can't help but think just how risky it is that Poccy would allow Rogue to interrogate by touch, since any contact with a former acquaintance could potentially unlock her own memories - as seems to be the case already... Just how great is his control over her?

The quality of your writing also seems to have shot into the stratosphere in the interim since the last chapter. I was pleasantly surprised and very much impressed. Every line was a story in itself, a worth of meaning and image, and a joy to read. Not only was it smooth and flowed well, it was just full of imagery and I loved it! Kudos for that!

Lastly...I particularly enjoyed certain references to other AUs... For instance Mutant X in the Fallen. That's exactly how I saw Warren when you described him earlier on! And your description of Poccy very much reminded me of Askani'Son and the Adventures of Cyclops and Phoenix - I love that image of Apocalypse, rather than the big blue mutha with the oh-so-hard 'A' on his belt. I mean, what were they thinking?

Okay, that's about it for now. I think I'll leave the speculation for the time being - I'm quite content to be caught up in a state of suspense. Oh, and if you need a beta-reader, I'd surely oblige, just email me or note me on DA...

Great work, I'm even more excited to see how this turns out (I thought it was epic in the first place, but now it's seems you're turning it uber-epic or something ;), so update as soon as you possibly can! :D

Lossa luv,

-Ludi x

So Archangel and Havok are two of the Horsemen. For some reason, I'm thinking Avalanche is another one, and Sabertooth's the fourth. Am I right?

i'd really wish you'd updat i love this story its brilliant so puhlease update!

*strokes chin* fascinating. very very fascinating. please continue.

So far i cant think of any theories. I'll wait another chappie or two before i start rambling and ranting off theories in earnest ::giggles::

Please continue. Oh and Warren's one of the Horsemen? I sure hope tat Roguey aint Poccy's queeny.

Corri! Is there anyway I can bait you into writing another chapter? What level do I have to stoop to in order to see some more of this oh-so-wonderful story? Would a million dollars work? Well, tough, 'cos I ain't got a million dollars! How about torture? Nah, I could never do that to you, my dear!

Okay, okay, so I'm going to have to resort to grovelling in the muck and the dirt.

:gets down on hands and knees:

"PLEASE UPDATE!" T_T

-Ludi x

PS: - No pressure or anything... ;D

oh wow! please tell me you're going to keep writing this- its amazing! What happened to Jean? is she the girl that Logan didn't come back with? And I'm kinda confused as to what happend to Rogue after the prologue- she hasn't gone completely evil has she? oo the suspense! this is great keep it up!

heyhey! this is awesome so far! and i'm only on the 1st chapter! very well written!