 Amashelle 2004-12-16 . chapter 1Why have I not read this one yet? I must have missed it - I just love your writing though, so I keep coming back to see if you've written more LotR fics, and whoa and behold... okay, so it's not really new, but it is to mo, :D.
Anyway, once again, you have awed me with your talent and taken my breath away. One thing - are you sure 'deaths' is spelt 'deathes'? It might just be me - I'll have to double check my spell checker later, but I'm pretty sure it's the former. You also said 'with king' instead of 'witch king'. On a note asside from spelling, I think it might flow better if you eliminate the fist 'I am Eowyn, and I carry with me a woman's strengh', it takes away from the force of the final statement. |