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Amashelle
2004-12-16
ch 1,
abuseWhy have I not read this one yet? I must have missed it - I just love your writing though, so I keep coming back to see if you've written more LotR fics, and whoa and behold... okay, so it's not really new, but it is to mo, :D.

Anyway, once again, you have awed me with your talent and taken my breath away. One thing - are you sure 'deaths' is spelt 'deathes'? It might just be me - I'll have to double check my spell checker later, but I'm pretty sure it's the former. You also said 'with king' instead of 'witch king'. On a note asside from spelling, I think it might flow better if you eliminate the fist 'I am Eowyn, and I carry with me a woman's strengh', it takes away from the force of the final statement.
Blume
2004-01-18
ch 1,
abuseI like it, you write very well. Only that big parqagraph made me loose attention for a while, but I guess it's fine since it's a monologe.. ^^;
u6u5h
2003-12-20
ch 1, anon.
abusegood fist chapter i like
Celedir
2003-12-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is a really good fic but you need to spell check it. Spell check it and then repost it! But this is a very good fic!
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