Great job! I'd love to see more from you! :~)

Aw! That ending was so sad! Well, a good ending, but sad. Now I'm just confusing myself..

+_+ October Sky

Good job! It's a well written script and very in character! I have actually written two dead zone scropts myself and I'm working on a third and debating about putting them up on the site.

+_+ October Sky

This totally read like the series! I could easily see this as an episode! Unfortunately, the way the show is currently going, it looks like they've got a whole different angle going. :(

However, I still think this script rocks! This was absolutely excellent- and I agree with other reviewers, the interaction between Bruce and Johnny was supurb!

Great story! I would love to see it actually acted in the series. The characters overall were true to character, and the ending was very cute!

This was a really interesting story. I thought most of your dialogue was very good. I particularly liked the scenes between Johnny and Bruce. I was able to visualize the story as I read it, which was a lot of fun. I thought the ending was a bit abrupt. You didn't explain why the girl was taken by the man. Was this a plan or spontaneous? Was he going to hold her for ransom?
This was one of the most complete and well-written fan fictions I have read.

Oh wow, that was a great story, I really enjoyed it, it was just like one of the actual shows! it'd make a great show too! I was slightly confused at the first, I didn't think you had Johnny in character but as the story progressed you sure fixed that. All I can say is wow, great story, I'd like to read more.