Heeheehee! Spike-person MUST be alive! It would kill the fic/show if he died! You must have hiom come back to the Bebop! Bwahahahahahahahahahaha!

I was never really a huge fan of Cowboy Bebop, but I do find amusement in the antics of Radical Edward. Another great piece by the ever unpredictable Cat.

Hao: There's a reason why you two talking to each other scares me, but I still can't quite figure out what that reason is...

As much as I enjoy an Ed-centered story, I found this chapter very difficult to read. It would be most helpful for your readers if you would break up the dialog--general rule is each time a different person speaks, new paragraph.
That said, it looks like you're off to an interesting start.