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| giveGodtheglory 2005-04-23 ch 11,  | abuseI wonder why everyone always wants to make the Phoenix evil? |
| Levi Fiction 2004-10-15 ch 8, | abuseNot bad, not bad at all. There were a few grammatical things but all in all it wasn't bad. The emotion of Scott over Jean was very nice. For the most part you stayed true to Xavier's and Magneto's personalities. The others seem generic at best. But yes all in all, not bad at all. Hope to read more later. |
| Stretch 2003-12-27 ch 5, | abuseActually, the first mutant ever was En Saba Nhur (aka Apocolypse)but he hasn't yet been introduced into the movieverse so it's all good. Intersting premise for a story. Continue. |
| divad relffehs 2003-12-26 ch 3, | abusexavier would have simply told them mentally translating or learned there langue |
| Mystic Vixen 2003-12-19 ch 2, | abuseI like! Keep writting. Nothing much to say about this chapter cuz it is kind of short. See you later |