Dont get me wrong,I am very glad that there arent any lemons, but u might wanna lower the rating b/c so ppl wont read a M fanfic. I RLALLY liked it though!

YAY! I love this story!
The ending is kinda abrupt tho. It's like sessy and katrina are fighting one paragraph, and then two sentences later they're married! Rather confusing, 'tis.
But it's still really really good!
Thank you so much!
muffins to you!

This story was rather differnt from the masses I've read. This is the first Roman based one,a nd I rather enjoyed reading it while it lasted. A bit sad, yes, that it ended abruptly... but I know how writing works, I too am a writer. Well I'll be reading more of your stories, and waiting for Virtual Reality II and I. VR I was the pimp shniz x3 You'll hear from me again, peace.

...i like it...

Ha ha! That's great! Thanks... Uh... did I review any of the other chapters...? Uhm... n_n'
Oops.

:( No updates...Hope everything is ok. And I hope an update comes soon.

whoo whoo whoo! i demand a sequel. no no i was just kidding but you cut me off so soon. i had no idea the end was coming! it was like boom...they made up. i wanted to see sesshomaru get all mushy! whaa! ok but i liked it! ja ne!

I luved this story but I am a sucker for an Inu/kag story so this is really cute. I wasnt sure at first when they were placed in Rome but I luved it in the end. ;)

nice, and it was going well too. but i didn't like how you ended it so abruptly. this is not a flame by the way.

ARGH! that was very mean of you to end the story like that! I loved this fanfiction! Even if it didn't do to well i think you should have written the ending like you wrote the rest of the story.

aww.. i really like that story...

that ending really sucked. but i'm sure other people have told you that. still, we wouldn't want you to write something you weren't interested in, because that would be pointless.

i hate not having idea pan out like they are supposed to.

anyway, off to read the next thing.
laters!
cinnamin girl

does katrina speak anything but japanese and spanish? cause the french have some pretty interesting profanity...

lol.. There was nothing R-rated about this story, much to my satisfaction. I hated the way you ended it, but I guess I'd do the same if I got sick of writing a fic. But I have yet to do that..write a fic, that is.. haha
Anyway, I thought it was a great story. Usually, I hate fics that have original main characters, but you did that so well. I wasn't displeased by the fact that Katrina was in there, and she was a cool character. I like that she switched languages every three seconds. That made things interesting, especially since I know a lot of Spanish.
I didn't like that the story was so short. It seems like you left a lot out that could have been in there. Naraku wasn't nearly as cruel as he could have been, Inuyasha not nearly as obnoxious, and Sesshoumaru not nearly as arrogant. But I guess that happens when you get bored with your own story.
Hey, kudos to you and your great grammar. I hate it when fics would be great if the author's grammar didn't suck so much. Needless to say, yours did not suck.
Anyway, great fic. I'll check out some of your others when I have the time.

well that was an interesting first chappie.. but why pick naraku for kag's father? i guess cause he's one of the only male evil characters?

laters!
cinnamingirl

lmfao i love it!! this was a great story!