Reviews for Pirates of the Caribbean: The Feline of Forever

Reviews For: Pirates of the Caribbean: The Feline of Forever

Calum the Angel 2004-05-06 ch 7,	abuseYay! I reviewed your story! I saw you on my author alerts, so I decided to get a look at this one. Pirates of the Caribbean, and all that. I suppose I should go read the other chapters, huh? :P Sorry! I like to write more than I like to read... But well done, yes. And...Jack Sparrow! WHE! Write summore, and I'll read it!
Ash 2004-01-07 ch 6, anon.	abuseVery nice, Ali. Keep writing. Please! :> I wanna know what happens. Does Will rescue the girl and Jack? WHAT happens?! Lol!!
Ghost of the Robot 2003-12-29 ch 6, anon.	abuseThe story's starting to pick up! Yay! LOL drunk Jack is just way too funny!! You did an awesome job! Sorry 'bout the short review but I'm in a hurry. Keep up the great work!!
Ghost of the Robot 2003-12-28 ch 5, anon.	abuseNo! cries out in anguish and falls to the floor in desperation You cannot stop there! There has to be some unwritten rule somewhere about stopping at such an evil cliffhanger! pounds the floor with fists I wanna know what happens!! sighs well if I can't have it now I'll just have to wait until you update...which will be much awaited. I have not wanted to read something more than I want to now. Great job, none the less, and keep up the magnificent work.
labelbasher 2003-12-25 ch 4,	abusepoor abigail. Will should feel guilty, silly boy. does jack come in the next chapter? i hope so...me likes jack very much. ~Rhi
Ash 2003-12-24 ch 3, anon.	abuseReally good story, Ali. but what does Abigail fit into all this? You could, i don't know, make her Will's adopted daughter or something. Just a suggestion. here's a question. Where's Elisabeth? Hehehe. Other than that, keep writing. Luv ya like a sista.
Ghost of the Robot 2003-12-24 ch 3, anon.	abuseYou did an awesome job at capturing Will's character. I can hear him saying that in my head...which, now that I think about it, doesn't sound sane of me lol. But it does mean that you've got his character down pretty good. I love your style of writing. I don't know exactly what it is...but I'll give a go at telling you. The way you write everything descritively and with great word use, but at the same time its written with simplicity. Its just awesome. The very thought of reading on brings a grin to my face! And that's all I have to say. No, wait. I just have one more thing to say before I go on my marry li'l way: I don't like the chef. He's evil.
labelbasher 2003-12-23 ch 3,	abuseim so loving this story. this chapter was nice and long. it's cool that Will's so nice to her, it was rather cute... when do we get to see jack? i want jack! heh heh... i hope to hear more from you soon. ~Rhi
labelbasher 2003-12-23 ch 2,	abuseAha, so that's what she was doing in the bakery...thieving...heh heh. abigail sounds very pirate-like, especially with that hat thing.
labelbasher 2003-12-23 ch 1,	abusei love the description that you put into this chapter. it really brings the story to life. those twins sound funny. abigail sounds pretty cool too, which leaves me wondering what she was doing in the bakery. well, i shall go read the next chapter to find out...
Ghost of the Robot 2003-12-20 ch 2, anon.	abuseBeautifully written. I loved the way you described everything and I think its off to a great begining. I can't wait to see what else happens in this story :-D BTW, you're lucky I reviewed...yes, I'm one of those evil silent readers, but I saw that your fic didn't have any reviews and I thought I'd help you out because one: I would hate it if no one reviewed my story, and two: this is just really nicely written and it deserves a review.

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