It could use some page breaks, I got a bit confused.

But that's not the point.

That...was probably the only story with a kid in it that actually was, well, good. Great job.

I love this. Especially the characterization of Naruto was perfect. I love the way that at first he couldn't handle the intensity and confusion of learning Sasuke loved him, but that as soon as the kid was gone, he was there with the tension-breaking sake and his sexy grin. No real critiques, except the characterizations of the kids didn't seem nearly as real. I mean, they didn't seem like real kids. But then, they have unusual parents, so...
Thank you so much for giving of yourself. More please!

Liked the story! Great idea about the eyes! Real smart! XD

your story so cute it made me happy cry... i needed to cry too i'm glad it was a happy one ^.^ thank you

Oh how wonderfully written. I loved the end. It was one of those endings that made me sigh in contentment and made me smile. Keep writing more wonderful stories like this. ^^

Anbure walked back from his training exercise. Sarana sitting on the swing. He walked up to her and they looked at each other.

Sakura and her husband watched from across the playground.

Green eyes met blue. The spitting image of Sasuke.

Sarana smiled. "You have the same eyes as me."

Wordlessly, Anbure held out his hand, and she took it.

Funny how history repeats itself sometimes.

- Okay, I know I sound stupid but I don't get this last part. Kindly enlighten me please.

wow.. that's awesome story man keep it up

How does Anbure have the same eyes as Sarana?

Oh, and I LOVE THIS ONE-SHOT! Serious, it's supacalafrikenawesome

That was a beautiful story. Very moving. I´m glad it has a happy ending!

Wow!
That felt like getting lost in a maze, running anguished believing you reached the exit until you slam onto the wall! And then, it all ends well and you find your self in a shiny place were love goes in pairs and people end up together, happy.
Wow, you have a unique style and I enjoyed every bit of this story especially the scene where Naruto waited outside Sasuke's room to admit, finally, he loved him.
Brilliant!

This made a blubbering mess of me! Thank you :)

Yes-!

100th Review! Ok no that's not why I read this xD Don't usually like OC's but that was brilliant and Sasuke X Naruto? Hell yeah! To me, that is actually the most cannon pairing, should any ever exist in Naruto XD

aww i love this

wow, that was really good XD

i didn't know where this story until the very last line, which, just happened to leave me it tears!

Oh wow! That was just PERFECT! There is no other way to describe it!

You have such an interesting style of writing; it's so subtle yet mind-blowing! Wow- Thats all I can think of at the moment. I am speechless!

*glee*

Just to let you know this is possibly one of the best things i have read on fan-fiction!

My new Favorite,

Much Love,

xshadows-r-nothingx