 Marcus S. Lazarus 2008-11-22 . chapter 25I have to admit, I like this one a LOT better than the last one; a more action-orientated plot, a better opportunity for the characters to see each other in their ‘natural’ environments as they each save the world from their united villains in their own unique style, and some VERY interesting sequel potential at the end (After all, can you imagine how Xander and (Maybe) Andrew would react to learning that Angel and Willow (Cordelia’s more of a maybe after this) are dating members of the “Galaxy Quest” cast?)
I particularly liked seeing how the “Galaxy Quest” cast reacted to the news of Angel’s nature; the interaction between him and Gwen in particular was actually kind of cute, and the Thermians’ confusion over how to cope with a walking corpse that doesn’t show up in mirrors and- apart from lacking a pulse or body heat- walks and talks like a normal person was also well-portrayed.
Of course, the subsequent fight with the bad guys could have been longer, but hey; Angel gets to tear an alien warlord’s head off, so good times were had all around.
Admittedly, I think you could be a BIT less harsh on Jason in your writing- half the time you’re writing him he seems to have regressed to his pre-Thermian arrogance while the other half he seems to be the relatively decent guy he was at the end of the original film-, and I still think you could have included SOME reference to the age gap between Willow and Alex, but those details aside, the plot remained an interesting one.
Plus, as I said, the sequel potential you’ve laid for the next one looks like it could be interesting; you might not write it- particularly given the length of time that’s passed since you finished this story- but the potential’s there.
Keep up the good work! |
 Stupid Hermit 2007-09-12 . chapter 22Hm... Was this a reference to Stargate?:
":No, not the budge, try the translation by Jackson.:"
Either way, I've really enjoyed what I've read of this story so far. |
 Queen Serenity 2005-10-21 . chapter 1Hm... I tried to read this, I really did. But I only got a few chapters into the story... I just couldn't focus on it. There was nothing in it to catch me, and so it was too long for me to finish. Sorry. I still say the first one was excellent though. |
 Darklight 2005-07-22 . chapter 16nice one, so ther Termians going to get Cordy a solution the souold thing, soul energy by by internal incinery device gets actived and by by Angelus. |
 Cow as White as Milk 2005-06-21 . chapter 15Yay! An update! |
 Cow as White as Milk 2005-05-03 . chapter 14Wow! This is getting sticky... I like so far. I don't recall which chapter had the question "Would the Thermian’s taste like calamari", but I got a kick out of it. LOL... Keep it up! |
 Darklight 2005-03-23 . chapter 13Great going, keep the chapters coming |
 Cow as White as Milk 2004-09-23 . chapter 10LOL! Yay! You brought in Guy! Keep it up! |
 Queen Hotaru 2004-09-01 . chapter 10 YAY! YOU UPDATED *confetti falls* I like this story and the first one. I've never seen a crossover of these two units (tv show and Galaxy Quest.) before I stumbled upon your story..
Just wondering if, when you write them back to earth, you were gonna write them filming the ep that'd be fun.
-abby |
 Shelly (Michelle) Chamberson 2004-07-19 . chapter 9 OMG! I've never thought of this sort of crossover before, but this is great! please please please update soon!
-Abby |
 Darklight 2004-07-08 . chapter 9great chapter. |
 Cow as White as Milk 2004-02-06 . chapter 5LOL...It's great! I was hopeing Cordy, Willow and Angel would visit the Protector. And I'm happy to see that Malthesar is in this story too. By the way...where is Guy? Just wondering, cause I sort of miss his "Plucky comic relief." |
 Cow as White as Milk 2003-12-20 . chapter 2Oh, Yay! A sequal! I loved the first story...I can't wait for more! |