Great punctuation is a bit off but otherwise its great.I think Lily and Joe make a great couple and hopefully you will continue this story.I want to see if Lily and Joe get together properly and I would love to see what Heather update soon.

I hope you're going to add more to this story. It's really fun!

LOL the tougue reference was classic! It was too short though! Write more!

AH! Where is the rest? what happens next? You can't stop there keep writing. I want to know what happen next please.
LF **

aw, now we're gettin to the good stuff! I love it! :)

hey nice! I keep waiting for a love confession :) Keep it up!

Great chapter, loved it. Hope you get the next one up soon though because I'm dying to know what happens!

Oh I could cry! How sweet! You really must write more joe and Lily fics!

I'm still loving this story, but I gotta ask: Do you have a beta-reader who proofreads your writings? If not, I strongly suggest you find one. I'd be happy to volunteer, if you do decide to find a beta.
Great job with your storyline. I like how Joe went after Lily when she needed him.

Aww, poor Lily! Joe and Darnell better hurry up and rescue her!

I *really* love the dialogue in this! Like the others said, punctuation and grammar would be helpful, but whatever you want to do is good, as this is a great story (I am of course bias, any Handler fanfiction I am sure to love, lol, which is no insult to your writing, which I like a lot!). I hope you'll write more and update soon!

It's got potential (yeah, Joe/Lily's cool) but the spelling and grammar, if corrected, could transform this story into something /really/ good.

I love this story. Waiting for the next chapter!

Love it! Just one question. Why did you put the whole song? You could have spent some time on Joe's reaction to her singing while he was hiding around the corner. But don't worry it's a great story.
LF **
So when is the next chapter coming again?

It could use some punctuation, but it's still good otherwise. Thanks for updating!