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| Nio Rein 2008-08-08 ch 15,  | abuseGreat story! Nothing to complain about. Going to read "Friend or Foe" again. |
| CandyMountainRocs 2008-07-14 ch 15, | abuseloved the story & the plot, but i thought it could have used more filling... |
| Cheska 2008-07-01 ch 15, | abuseWow... O_O He befriended Tom, and found Nagini! |
| Celebwen Telcontar 2008-06-26 ch 15, | abuseVery good! Exceptional! CT |
| sayena 2008-06-19 ch 15, | abuseGreat idea, well written, well thought out. I'm off now to read the sequel. Thanks for a good read. Sayena |
| MULAN-IFUWEREGAY 2008-06-17 ch 15, | abuseUpdate Soon |
| Kryztol Thorn 2008-06-16 ch 15, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this story. Sometimes I think you needed to read through to make sure you had used the right spelling, etc. But the plot line was great! |
| Lost underneath Time 2008-06-07 ch 15, anon. | abuseWonderful Story a lil short but well worth the read |
| Saere 2008-06-06 ch 2, | abuseThis looks really good! I'm happy I stumbled upon it. ^_^ |
| Cledio 2008-05-31 ch 15, | abuseI just read through your fiction and i quiete liked it. But it was so short i can't really say anything about it. I really liked the plot, it's an interessting idea to let Harry and tom be friends, it' ll for sure put very interesting twists in the sequel. I think you could have gone more in depht about the whole relationship between Tom and Alex and sometimes the story sounded more like notes about what was going to happen in the year then an actual narration. When I have time I'll read the sequel. I hope it will be longer and more detailed but I'm sure it will have a great plot. |
| syluskun 2008-05-30 ch 15, anon. | abuse:O I must say this is a very interesting story! Though everything seem a little too rushed. you could have added more encounter with other slytherins or the other houses or more interaction with Tom -hugglessquishyourTom- (I so love your version of Tom and Alex) :P oh and you could have introduce more characters in it, even though its trivial. there was a few grammar/spelling mistakes here and there but easily overlook as I was drawn by the wicked plot line. overall, I think it was well written. :D one thing though, you might want to add a little note on your summary of friend or foe that it is a suqeual to this fic. I was a bit conffused there. anyways keep on writting, yes? cheers! |
| HPObsession22 2008-05-10 ch 15, | abuseI forgot to submit a review for this one, silly me. Loved it! Sorry, that's not much of a review is it? lol. But still... |
| nixglen@gmail.com 2008-04-23 ch 15, anon. | abuseI enjoyed this very much and am looking forward to the sequel. |
| Ara 2008-03-24 ch 15, anon. | abuseOh this was great! I actually read Friend or Foe first and then discovered there was a prequel. I think this is very believable as it is but i dont think this would have been so good on it's own. But now when i actually had read the sequel first, i kept having tears in my eyes. All the flashbacks i didnt quite understand in Friend or Foe came so clear. Now im just waiting to hear what happens to Harry after he is obliviated.. |
| chie-chan 2008-03-13 ch 1, | abusemagnificent! |