I liked the story, but it felt like it was missing a chapter in between chapters 'Hogwarts' and 'Quidditch'. This was a bit confusing, and it took me some time to understand that he was a Slytherin not, say, a Ravenclaw. Also, you mentioned a conversation at the Sorting Feast that the reader isn't privy to, leading to some confusion. Other than those, I cannot think of any major problems.

'sneakeded' - not a word, the word is 'snuck'
sorry, im a grammer freak
omg i love the ending!

hahah tom actually doesnt like the lord part of his name
its nice to see him act so casual, its refreshing

i love the friendship between them, and how strong it is despite their futures :'(
im really scared about what will happen when Harry/Alex goes back...you're a brilliant writer, did you know that?

very short chapter, but good none-the-less

i'm hoping the sequel has more sustanance than this one- this was like an extended prologue, it seems to just be setting up the action.
but it was a nice read, if a bit quick. and it could use an edit for grammar.
anyway, sequel. NOW.

Voldie and Nagini are in for a surprise.

What a painful irony. Harry choosing Riddle's name.

History repeating itself. Nice touch with the Christmas present and with how Salazar Slytherin made sure no one but his heir would find instructions on how to open the Chamber of Secrets.

So I'm not much for reviews. You have a really interesting idea behind this, I read "Rectifier" right before reading this, and I must say wow! Your writing has improved a lot since this was published >.>
It's a great story, pretty well written, but sometimes the grammar was a bit off. Usually that would prevent me from being able to read past the first chapter of a story, but I was too interested to stop reading this.

...And as a side note, I saw on your profile you're from Hong Kong, that's awesome; I went there recently, it was a great experience for me.

Ok before I start I just want to tell you that I'm not very good with reviews and things so I'm sorry.

I like the fact that Harry lost his memory, that gives the story a twist. I haven't read very many without him knowing who Tom is and hating him. :D

I like it that Nicholas found Harry instead of Dumbledore or anybody else.

I LOVE the way you incorperated [I shouldn't use big words I can't spell ^^;] Nagini!! That was totally awesome!! :D

I really like your story and I hope this was a good review. :D

~Kat

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I like your strories!They're all so attractive!

AMAZING story- I abosolutely love the concept AND the way it's written--way to go!!

I like your story very much... it has a good plot and it WORKS... many stories don't... you have done a wonderful job writing this...