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Outlet of Shadows 2008-10-19 . chapter 6
FINISH THIS!-
Feline Jaye 2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Ah ha ha ha. He still hates him.

Nice story. It's interesting.
annatari.the.writer 2008-08-07 . chapter 6
Very intriguing. I like the unusual portrayal of Narcissa having the most influence over Draco. I also like Draco in this; he's smart and very Slytherin, but also vulnerable. I'm eager for more of this story!
Technomad 2008-06-22 . chapter 6
Frankly, if I were Draco, I'd be making nice with Weasley-and explain it to my parents, if necessary, by saying that:

A) It's a good way to get close to Potter, and
B) Seducing Weasley over to the Malfoys' side would drive his family spare.
Cream and Sugar 2007-10-18 . chapter 6
Great story! I really like Draco's personality, and Narcissa is such a schemer.
Laserwolf 2007-05-03 . chapter 6
I really enjoy this, it's very original. Please finish The Family Name third year. It's my favorite!
porpierita 2007-03-23 . chapter 2
Whoa! Really nice work! Have you stopped writing it? Please update though! Draco seems so much like Artemis Fowl. Except maybe with more emotions :)
DemonOfShadow 2006-11-13 . chapter 6
Pretty good story, I would enjoy more chapters.
Falling Actions 2006-09-10 . chapter 2
dude, i rarely review stories, even the ones I like, but your's are like...magnifique!

anyway, what really strikes me about this story is the devotion Draco shows his mother. It reminds of King Arthur's era with all that undying chivalrous blind devotion and it doesn't bode well for Draco. so, that's really intriguing. I absolutely admire how you're describing Draco. It certainly seems accurate so far and that's another thing I like.

Also, the way you mold your plotline with Draco's perspective is beautiful, really seamless. That really stands out, too. Lovee your writing style.
sami 2006-04-05 . chapter 6
I just have to say, I love the way you write draco malfoy. You have an amazing way with words, and the point of view and narrative of this story are so unique! I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Almost Funny 2006-02-07 . chapter 6
I hope that you continue this fic. Your writing style is fantastic! Your characters have depth and are realistic. Please update sometime!
Candelabra 2005-10-10 . chapter 6
Wow . . . very int-er-ostingo . . . update soon, please!!
Candelabra 2005-10-10 . chapter 2
Hey! This is actually pretty . . . interesting!

That sounded so mean. But I didn't expect to like it . . . hm . ..
Silver Solo 2005-06-28 . chapter 6
Very nicely done but just to point out the third section, Malfoy isn't fifteen yet since this takes place in fist year.
Yea...
Good job; keep going with this and your Family Name series.
debolicangel24 2004-11-07 . chapter 6
this is shockingly good! keep on updating!
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