Very poetic...LOL. Anyway, you should totally continue, it's a waste if you don't.

MORE!

Wow. THis was great, you NEED to continue this. It is too good to be left like that! Please continue!
Happy writing,
-SEP

Oh, beautiful. Simply beautiful. You're trying to make me woship aren't you? simple, sweet, catches you right at the heart and throat... *hugs you in strong arms* this is a beautiful piece, one of infinate levels and layers... *sigh* damn Author of infinate genious and stunning eloquence, do you *have* to be so good? the Vignette medium is your playground, and you it's goddess. *bows to the goodness and goes to gleam a few more before bowing to the power of the sunrise to nap before class*

how was it? brilliant. screaming for something to follow, but good with that ending. leaves it very open for possibilities. good work!

Well that was soo good!
TBC?

cool

weird but I like it. Hope you writte something more.
. Aspid .

Will this be continuing? I think that it could be made into an amazing story.

So far, it is very good. Can't wait for more.

Are you going to continue this ? Because it was a good piece of writing. Wel duh *rolls eyes* or else I wouldn't be asking you this. Please continue.

This is quite good. I hope to see more soon, and keep up the good work!

This is pretty good for a first chapter.
Keep up the goor work.

Harry gets a note from Snape? Snape didn't die?