Wonderful Story, Keep up the good work, and i hope to see an update soon.

Think your story is awaome and I also like the magna you posted at Fanart-central. Please continue the magna, and soon.

I really like this story and i cant wait for you to update it.

your probably not going to like this but i keep on seeing through spelt as thru, if you could do something like run a spell check through the chapters it would give the story a lot more appeal.

I like your art work for this, i got the link from your art, and i hope you add more

Heh... I've written a few of these myself, Self Inserts. If done well, they can be exceptional stories, and so far, you've been doing it well.

And feel free to do any art of any of my stories. I'd love to see what you come up with. ^__^

Hey its me Master Shake, i met you at AI'05 and shook everyones hand, including yours. pretty interesting first chapter. But i wonder rework this whole story, well nice meeting you

add to the story

nice that was way of doing to fight sence if you want 2 read my story it is dragon ball z story

Sorry once again for offending you Artful. But I've always liked the name Amadeus from Mozart's name, and I use the shortened 'Deus' as kind of a pet name. Like instead of some people being called Matthew they prefer Matt. Also I make his decisions by what I'd do in the situation and what I believe would happen from the sum of my past experiences. Sorry once again that my characters name offends you. Please accept my deepest apologies (gives bow), and thank you for the food for thought so I can try not to offend anyone else.

Yes, Amadeus means love of god, but the character is usually refered to as Deus, which just means god. Considering he's a godlike figure I considered it infantile and sophmoric.

To put it simply, you suck.

Who doesn't Motoko? She's beautiful, steadfast, high in morals and principles and really loyal. Great job.

Awesome job. Please continue.

good keep it up

This story shows promise. It's pretty good considering that it's your first fic. Just watch out for the few grammar mistakes and typos that I happened to spot. Well done.

Naming your character 'god'... yeah, that's subtle.

Naming your character 'god'... really subtle.