 crystal tears of betrayal 2006-07-05 . chapter 3AW! This was so cute! |
 heheangel kisses 2004-03-06 . chapter 3interesting fic! i love it so much! GO SYAORAN!
update soon! |
 Mystical Moon Wolf 2004-01-17 . chapter 3Great Story and i liked it because of it's originality.
it was freaky how Syaoran didn't even move a sinch when the 4 were putting out there anger on Syaoran but Syaoran left his mark. |
 Avelyn Lauren 2004-01-15 . chapter 3YOu did a good job! I can't wait 'til they figure out that the heir was the kid that beat the crap out of them.
I already knew he was the Li heir. so I guess I count as no one myself. I look forward to reading your other work. I'm getting ready to read the last thing that you updated.
arigato and ja ne! |
 nightglider-star 2004-01-14 . chapter 3 That was so sweet! Defineatly looking forward for more from you. BTW; If you have time, I would like to invite you to my message board ^_^
it's; http://nightglder.proboards20.com/index.cgi
Hope you can come! ^_^ Lots of fanfiction authors can be found there although as I have just recently built it, I need to invite more! ^_^ Oh well, Nice fic anyway! ^_^ Plzplzplzplzplz continue it! *gets teary eyed* |
 AnimeObsessionFantasy 2004-01-14 . chapter 3that was nice ^^ I wish my sibs were like that >.< instead, we fight.. o wellz.. -- |
 Mystical Moon Wolf 2004-01-10 . chapter 2Isn't Sheifa the oldest?
Nice chapter, i hope u update soon.
In nice, meaning good for Syaoran killing that idiot.
Syaoran should have reaaly killed all of them but i suppose ur saving that for later? |
 Mystical Moon Wolf 2004-01-10 . chapter 1Great start and the way u described everything was brilliant.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Syaoran was described, i don't know how to say it but it's something good. |
 Avelyn Lauren 2004-01-04 . chapter 2Hey keep going. The next chapter should prove to be good. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
 AnimeObsessionFantasy 2004-01-04 . chapter 2hmm.. really sad... Happy Hoildays!! .. or whats left of it ^^;; |
 Avelyn Lauren 2003-12-20 . chapter 1Interesting! You did a good job on the plot and the idea behind it.
I did try to e-mail you on Last Night. Your e-mail didn't go through for some reason. You did a really good job on the feel of emotions on it.
I think that it was sweet that she came to see him at his apartment.
I didn't like the fact that they were at the point of going beyond go kissing. I could see it as a possibitlitieswhen they are older. As a 13 year olds I don't see it.
at the end I liked the fact that he was there to save her. It was even sweet the fact that they had kissed and remembered the promise that they made one another. All in all it was a good story I jsut didn't like that part. I can't wait to read the rest of your work!
Update the Li Guardians really soon1 Arigato and ja ne! |