Your story needs to win a prize.If you make another chapter longer than the last I think you might just get one.
DarkAngel from Hell13

i think this is the default chapter is okay without the 5 minutes later thing

Oh, that was so cute, and so funny, and so hot, and so... well, awesome! XD And the worse is that I could totally imagine Sasuke good in sewing and cooking. Since he lives alone (and he's too proud to ask for help), he probably had to learn it all by himself.

Yeah, Sasuke would make a good wife, so Naruto should marry him. (^_~) Jump on him, Fox Boy, go! I'm sure the Uchiha won't mind at all! XD

I adore the combination of humour and understated lust, and the fact they are delightfully themselves.

This fic cracks me up!

Wow... lol
How funny, short but funny...
nice one

lol awesome ending

Wonder what Sasuke was thinking...

this was funny, good work!:)

...hawt.

Leave it to Naruto and his compliments.

Perving, haha.

ZOMG.

Have you read hitchhiker's guide? because that whole 'higher processes gave up and went home for the weekend' sounded totally like something Douglas Adams would write. Which is so cool. I tried to pull that off once and it just sounded stupid.

Anyway. The point is, this was really cute.

Which was what i meant to stay, instead of ranting. Hmm.

[ ♥ : becca ]

I love that last line! Hilarious!

o.o Who knew sewing could be smexy? :O lol I like the ending XD Only thing that I'd do differently is maybe use italics instead of asterisks.

That was short sweet and amusing. Thank you.