you're my hero and I love this story. Even though it's incredibly sad.

ARGH! It's so obvious they belong together! >.< This was so adorable, but sad in that kind of frustrating way, like-- "No Spot! Go inside with Race! See the guys! Kiss under the mistletoe, anything!!" LOL. Great story.

I read this when it first came out and I enjoyed it a lot. I just read it again( this time with time to review ;0) ) and I still love it.
The way you cut the action blocks with the dialogue blocks was just wonderful. I just paused when reading it and said "This is damn good writing." to my kung-fu fighting hampster. He agreed.
Fabulous. Very fabulous. You Rock.

Oh...Xmas combined with the undefinable relationship that is SpRace...and a troubled, gave it a shot, but as reality has a habit of biting people in the ass didn't make it relationship...*melts* Hrmm...that seems like it should be wrong on some level, doesn't it? Haha. I'm so warped. Eh...but I like it. ;D
Awesome that they still got together even tho they were through and talked b/c of Xmas...even if when it was over they turned away from each other again. Very nice. And the ribbon...gah. Lovely symbol of the relationship. And how sweet Race always carried it with him. (can we hear a chorus of aws here). Haha. ;D
Interesting beginning for Spot...but I like it! XD
M...angsty troubled relationship...just how I like my SpRace. ;D
Great story, hon...I enjoyed it muchly. XD

Aww. That's sort of sad. And the ribbon s really good imagery.
But they had their kiss goodbye, so that's good.
:)

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*sniff* AW! Spot and Race are so cute!
They rock!! You rock! Multiple exclaimation marks rock! hehehe ^_^ I like the ribbon. It is so sweet! e!
I'm off to bed, so nighty night! Now I can have some sweet Newsie-licious dreams, where Spot and Race can live happily ever after. ^_^
Luffle you!
Gryffin

Your Spot/Race melts my heart.
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"Why'd you come here tanight, Spot?" Race asked suddenly, finally turning to look at the newsie next to him; the kid he'd once rescued, the man–young man–he'd once loved."
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-tears up-

You wrote it! You finally wrote it... [hugs]
Ah, I'm gonna cry now. Seriously. The sheer drama of SpRace-ness... Inevitable. And you play it up so damn well.
Dude. I love you. [hugs again]
Sleep is good.
Cheers.
Gothic Author

B, love! *beams*
I can't decide whether this fic was happy or sad... *shrugs* Either way, I liked it. A lot.
Lovely, m'dear, lovely. *hugs*
-Da Sita-

Aw, B! This is so sad! It's so short! It's so...so...GOOD! I love SpRace-ness, especially when it's so in-character and angsty. Hehe.
Good job, as always.

Aw, B! This is so sad! It's so short! It's so...so...GOOD! I love SpRace-ness, especially when it's so in-character and angsty. Hehe.
Good job, as always.

YOU ROCK.
I love you B. So much. I am reminded once again, as I am everytime I am talking with you and reading your work, that you are the best fucking writer ever and you know how much I eat and sleep and breath SpRace cake.
You...are amazing.

Good lord, B. Has anyone ever mentioned that you are the undisputed QUEEN of non-linear fics? Cause you are. Let's just say that right now.
I love this story. The characterization is dead on, the dialogue is SO newsie-ish, and your writing skills remain awesome as ever. Kudos to you, dahling.
*Crunch*

im too lazy to sign in and post a signed review. anway, WOW, that was sad poor race, poor spot, great symbolism with the ribbon being passed on and all. i feel really sorry for spot and race feel--they're too cute to be sad i wanna cheer them up. anyway, that story was deep and i really liked it.
PEACE
~Strawberri Shake