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Reviews for: Damaging Innocence
Rowan and Sakura 6/6/10 . chapter 1
I can't believe I never reviewed this story! I remember reading it years ago, printed it out so I could read it more than once, and reading it again, I still love it. I love imagining what might come after that question mark.

I also like imagining Kaiba's reaction when he returns home to that scene, haha.
Kari Izumi 1/4/07 . chapter 1
Nenya reccommended a few other works of yours to me, but I skimmed through your profile and found this story as well. It sucks no one's thought up a name for this pairing (I've been callign it Ledgendshipping for the Legendary Arc and all, but I'm rambling...)

I wouldn't be surprised at Mokuba not minding an older boyfriend/girlfriend. He's grown up a lot faster than other kids his age, so I think he's be a tad less affacted by the issues that Jounouchi understandably wishes to avoid.

Kaiba and Jounouchi both were very much themselves. No overt snarkiness or mutt insults, just Kaiba wanting Jounouchi to fic his "mistake."

If you decide to make a follow-up, I'd be more than glad to read it, but I love this story as it is.
Devious K 5/5/04 . chapter 1
Isn't it cute? I like SetoJou's, but this JouMokuba is sweet, write more.
Amanda-Writes-Forever 4/25/04 . chapter 1
This was really good. I liked it. Your a good writer!
Mary 3/20/04 . chapter 1
Hi !
First of all, this Story totally rocks my world.
You should Consider Doing more about this fic and/or more about this Pairing.
Love Ya !
Hush Puppie 3/17/04 . chapter 1
Wow. I really like this. Never seen this pairing before, but you've made me want to write something for it...
Well, maybe one of these days.
KlebKat 2/7/04 . chapter 1
XD Me like, me want more, me talking like a stupid little girl.
Anyway, write more!
Aera-Chan 1/23/04 . chapter 1
*sobs* that was cute! WAH! so very cute!
in truth i have never seen a jou/mokuba fic before! COOL! THIS ONE IS COOL!... IM AN IDIOT! BAHAHAHAHA!
Lemon-Merengue 1/4/04 . chapter 1
Wow. That was... Wow. I've never seen that pairing before, I'll have to admit. I liked it! XD
Becky!
Erika 12/27/03 . chapter 1
That's good. You should continue
KeiMaxwell 12/21/03 . chapter 1
Wow! O_o I don't really support this pairing, so I was rather surprised to actually like this story. (weird me...) I think you wrote it in a very sensitive way, so it came out really good. Though it's rather depressing... *goes hiding in bed* Good story!
Fire Dragon of Darkness 12/21/03 . chapter 1
This was incredibly well-written, considering the rarity of this pairing and how hard it is to find decent stories. I'm not a huge fan of Jou/Mokuba, but I did find this fic very good-you've included angst (always a plus), made such an unlikely situation incredibly realistic (as real, fictional characters can get) and made the end kinda fluffy (well, considering the circumstances and serious mood). All in all, very original, I love it.
Miss Drayn 12/21/03 . chapter 1
NO! THAT CAN'T BE THE END! WRITE MORE OF THIS, I BEG OF YOU! I LOVE JOUNOUCHI/MOKUBA!
...Please, PLEASE write more! I love this couple, and I don't see much of it.
I love this fic, and I want to see more. GIMME MORE! PLEASE? *Puppy dog eyes*
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