Well, this is getting deep.

I love the way you are weaving everything together! My mind feels like it's on some wacky rollercoaster! I can't wait to read more.

I know its a moot point and all, now that Marvel's brought him back themselves, but hey, this is fanfic, right? Please finish it! I want to see how it all ties together! Wolvie, the kids, Nathan, moscow, the spacesuit, Kelly, the whole deal. Please? With scotch on top?

HEY! Okay, I realize that the comics have made this kinda moot and all, but I really liked where this one was goign! And hey, what's Fanfiction for? Write more, please! *KP gets down on knees* Pleeeeaaaaaaaaaassssseee! Finish it! Wah!

Write more, write more! I'm sitting here drooling! I need more, pleeeeeaaaase! Pretty please with fried dragon on top?

Ooh...subtle...deep...I like it...I can't WAIT to see how it all ties in and wraps up together! Great job, keep 'em coming, please!

Oh, wow, this is awesome. I can't wait for more! This is professional-like Marvel writing here! Ever think about becoming the next Chris Claremont? I'm serious! I'm sitting here going, when's the next part copming, when's the next part coming? It's as bad as waiting between the comics! You HAVE to put more out, soon soon soon. I SO cannot wait for you to write another part. Wow, this is so cool. What's gonna happen to them? I gotta know, please PLEASE, WRITE MORE!

Interesting. I know nothing about Pete Wisdom (other than he's dead) but this was pretty cool. A little confusion because I thought X-characters had to come back from the dead at least once to be considered "real"... *sigh* Lost me a bit on some references, but that's my ignorance showing. If you want a wider reader base, try lessening the obscure ones or explain them a little more. And by the way, LONG LIVE CAPTAIN MARVEL! Why did they kill him? Why? Why... sob...WHY?

Nice. The late Peter Wisdom seems perfectly in character. And the writing style is well suited to that character. Do those last segments mean Cable will be showing up in part three?

wow, ya never cease to amaze me doqz, you're an awesome writer. i'm so loving this series. please do continue. i love pete wisdom and there just aren't enough stories showing what a competent guy he is. and, even less with romany. this really is great. love the brit speak!

oooohhh! this was just genius! i love pete wisdom and you got his character perfectly! this is amazing, i can't wait to read the rest. your dialogue is absolutely dead on.

'Romany Wisdom?' I knew I should have read that Pryde and Wisdom miniseries... Anywho, good story. Nice to see Pete get some attention. Equally nice to get a decent sized fanfic. You can only read *so* many 10k fics before getting sick of them... BTW-I caught the Captain Marvel and Rowan refferences, but just about everything else went over my head. Congrats man, you really know your Marvel Universe.