 TwistedLilBarbie 2007-07-31 . chapter 16Wow. what a dreadful story. I mean it's good..but...gah..It's painful to read :) good job. |
 apprentice assassin 2007-07-21 . chapter 16 Well, I make it a point to check when the last update was on all fics I plan to review, and since you haven't updated in three years, I'm gonna assume it's abandoned. This will not, however, stop me from saying that this is by far the most well-written and in-depth addict!Snape fic that I've read. Your style and form are great, and I especially liked the way you manipulate langua ge between your prose and dialogue, as well as the varied accents within the dialogue. It's rare to find this level of structure in fanfiction. I do hope you will one day pick up writing this again, or at least continue writing anything. If not, well that's just too bad for us fic-junkies isn't it? |
 Sarah 2007-03-29 . chapter 16 Dude, I know you. You know me. You need to finish this fanfic... or else. *gets mafia accent* I'll make it unpleasant for you. *Wicked witch accent* I'll get you and your little doggie too! I know where you sleep, ya know.
But seriously, finish this fanfic because I loves it so. And because I'll be emo-Sarah without having Snape spill his heart out to Lupin... Oh, my depraved little mind is going a mile a minute!
Seriously... Finish it. *comands with thunder and lightning in a most threateningly way* |
 Daddys Morbid Little Girl 2006-11-11 . chapter 16OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON! THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT SEVERUS TELLS REMUS IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!! |
 efua 2006-07-20 . chapter 15 OH, PLEASE Continue. This story is far too good to not compledet anytime. I really hope there are coming some new chapters soon. What is Mody planning, what will Severus tell Remus? I have to kwow that. So please sit down and write :-)NOW |
 Iisjah 2006-01-12 . chapter 16Great story - hope you'r be continuing it 'cause the next chapter should be very interesting indeedy :D |
 zafaran 2005-12-20 . chapter 15I'm just backing up a chapter cause I can't re-review on the final chapter. Is there any chance of getting more chapters on this story? It's terribly like watching a car crash in slow motion, You can't stop the progression of the crash, but it's also morbidly fascinating.
At this point in the story, I'd just so dearly love to shake Albus Dumbledore until his teeth rattled. Just *what* is the bloody bastard thinking. He's got a spy who's coming apart at the seams from the stress, so instead of getting him somewhere that's non-threatening to get some of the pressure off, he puts him at Order HQ in the very place where Alastor "the only good Death Eater is a dead Death Eater" Moody has had and continues to have free rein to teach and reinforce his blind bigotry and murderous prejudice in others, and the Weasleys and Harry are such fertile ground for these seeds of hatred. Dumbledore is lucky that Severus is working on a slow form of self-murder, cause we've just seen that Moody is going to try and speed that up. With the unremitting pressure, Dumbledore is just so lucky that Snape hasn't just walked into his lab and drunk a bottle of poison that has no antidote, and that is still a possibility lurking in the background. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and update with more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the very interesting work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm |
 zafaran 2005-08-21 . chapter 16Any chance of your finishing this story? It's very angsty and interesting, and I'd love to see where you go with it. Keep up the good work. Zafaran
zafaran at fastmail. fm |
 Aussie-mel 2005-08-02 . chapter 16I love this story keep up the fab work and please update soon.
Cya Aussie Mel |
 Arwen-star 2005-07-14 . chapter 16Yay! You updated! Im so happy! I thought you had totally forgotten out this story. |
 Athena Keating-Thomas 2005-04-13 . chapter 16Wow- a very powerful story and quite realistic. I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. Sounds like certain people haven't heard of 'enabling' before. ;) |
 ManaNana 2005-03-03 . chapter 16 PLEASE UPDATE FOR GODSSAKE! |
 PumpkinLettuce 2005-02-12 . chapter 2Wow. I love how you wrote in the voice telling Severus not to relapse. At least he's trying hard... Damned ignorant Moody, though. I'd like to tighten HIS leash a little too tight, myself... The meeting Remus went to is still a little confusing, but I'll most likely read this fic a million more times before I tire of it :).
Oh gee. Alcohol and drugs. Actually, that pretty much sums up my mental picture of Severus. I think his accent is pretty hilarious. I'm sure we'll hear it a lot :). |
 PumpkinLettuce 2005-02-12 . chapter 1*is speechless* Powerful stuff! The way the dark thoughts torment Severus throughout was written well, in my opinion. The thing about the addictiveness of Dark Magic was pretty cool, too. Never heard anything like that before; I love reading things I haven't seen before. The drug abuse adds a lot of drama, which is a good thing in this fic's case; it's not overpowering, which occurs a lot in other fics. Loved it! |
 Hermione the Slayer 2005-01-18 . chapter 2wow! |