Please update soon. I really want to find out what happens.

coolio, you had a goat? oh sorry, i might by walking on thin ice. anyways, loved the story...

don't worry about it. i still enjoyed reading this story. i absolutly love it!!

no! man. that was the most worst possible place to put a cliff hanger.. well, i can think of worse, but anyways. i loved it. i am seriosly put out that there isn't more right now. please, please , please update. i love it. it fallows the timeleine, but then it has it's own flair. wow. i am definatly adding this one to my favorites list. please update soon!

more, please finish it. i love the DN (daine/numair). and it's so original thinking of putting it to cinderella. i could never think of a thing like that. it's AWESOME!!

im just wondering but how old is alanna in this story?
is she like numair's age?

but um anyways
i love this story
i love the daine/numair pairing so i cant wait to read the rest of this story

that's awesome! i've read all of pierce's books and you've adapted the plot and characters wonderfully to fit Cinderella. but... wouldn't jonathan and thayet be a bit more considerate?

MORE MORE MORE! This is really good. You haven't updated in ages! *pouts* Please update? Please? It would make me and a lot of your fans happy! *adds to faves and alert*

-Sunkissed

I LOVE ERAGON! it is one of the best stories i have ever read!! infact i have the Eldest pre-ordered!! i So excited!

keep writing the fairy tale cause it is really good

please hurry up. by the way which version of cinderella is this? i have heard so many different tellings of it.

✠ the Phoenix Knight ✠

Sorry to put it on this story and not the other, but the other does not have a space for reviews, so I will do it here:

I am very happy they are making you read 'The War of the Worlds' in school. It is without doubt my favourite story. And I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed your poem/short story. Simple but effective.

You should visit the War of the Wrolds site and post it on there for true WOTW's fans to read, they will also enjoy it.

The site is as follows:

its cute...

Tee-hee! This is so great! Please keep updating, because I love to read this!

ok im osrry im such a nag but u noe alanna temperment do u relly think she would be so commanding? and wouldnt she jus call him numair? also numair and alanna r very very powerful they could probally trace the shoe to her lol

okay... well dunt u think daine wouldve recongnized him? and dunt u think if he was so in love wiht her being all dirty he would hav noticed this was her cleaned up?