... that was ... touching.
It's awesomeness really can't be described.

aw! that was KEWT!
you're really good for a first time SK fanfic writer!! keep it up!!

it was cute-ish.

Owl

it's not badly done! infact, i think it's really, really well written! It's just so...beautiful!
please write more sk fic! please~

HEY!, I also love this fic, and I ALSO love shaman king, (and I also love hao, but nobvody cares about it), I'v only seen a few chapters, but now it's my new obssesion!
I have NEVER read a ren/hao, but, never it's late to begin ne?
OK, bye

WE!

Your second couple was Ren/Lyze, darou? That was a lovely story! Such imagery, just beautiful! Now I really wish it would snow where I live . . . and I wish that Hao-sama would swing on by to my house . . .

Maa! Ma~! *glomps Hao and Ren* So CUTE~! Ehe...nandemo...I like, I like LOTS. So squishy... *murmers distractedly and walks off with Hao and Ren tucked under her arms* Ja ne!
Hao, Ren: Matte-
*POOF!*

it's pretty good, i guess.
your secondary couple is... uuh... Ren x Lyserg?

it's pretty good, i guess.
your secondary couple is... uuh... Ren x Lyserg?