Gorgeous work. The images you use are fantastic - creepy and morbid but lovely at the same time. I'm a sucker for work on the Vincent/Lucrecia/Hojo triangle, and you portray the relationship beautifully - the dark passion in this is so intense. I love the idea that even though the triangle has been dead and over with for thirty years, the three of them are still connected to each other, and always will be.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! I really liked your imagery, the different flowers and the fact that the three are bonded together. I just wanted to say that YES! I am a Hojo fan! I love him to bits! Well, I hope to see more stuff from you.

this is jeni through n's account...have finally read this! be happy!
confusing...but sounds cool...see u tuesday...ps, have you read moonstorms new review 4 chap 7 yet?

very pretty poem, good work, keep it up

Crimson!
You know... I liked this poem even more. The flower imagery was perfect... Haunting. And definitely augmenting one of the better poems I've read in a long time. Kudos!
My favorite couplet would have to be "A thousand red roses you gave who was mine/A thousand dead stalks made one deadly wine" ... it's dark, but it's perfect. Rhyme scheme, thematic element, and emotional impact are attended to throughout 'Hearts,'and it definitely shows. Keep up the amazing work; I look forward to reading more of it.
Regards,
~Sabriel.

*Screams* I WORSHIP this fic! What an amazing poem! I'm puttin' it on my fave stories even now! I love all the flower metaphors. Pure, undistilled brilliance.

Dunno how I missed this jewel. ^^;
I really like it, and the irony is quite beautiful.

This is deffinately better than most poetry that I see on FF.net, the rythm and meter work really well. I like the imagery, but I feel like Hojo gets off too easy.

You have a really cool rhythm here that was off in a few places, but it didn't detract from such beautiful wordplay. An excellent poem.

*claps* beautiful! I love the use of flowers... kind of strange coming from Hojo, but making it all the more creepier. I love your works on these three.. you are truly talented! Keep up the great work!
Kimmie

Ironic indeed. This was well done. It had a wonderful flow to it and lovely imagery. Vivid and great language use. I really like how you brought out the whole Vincent/Lucrecia/Hojo through these poetic devices ^__^; I hope I'm not coming across as "high-brow". Heheheh. Simply, I enjoyed this poem especially how you handled and expressed the characters' - I guess, 'downfall'/deaths. -- Thanks for posting.
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Write your heart. Write your soul. Write on!
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Jess 0:o)