OMG! That was the best fanfic yet! Great job!

Finnally a good go back in time story and save everyone.

perfect ending, and anyways, who gives a shit if he messed up the time-line?

once again i'm surprised to see that Harry has little to no emotional reaction... he's seeing his father for the first time since he was an infant. Sirius just died and he's seeing him again. He's meeting a young wormtail. You would think that all these things would elicit some sort of emotional response...

I really liked this. my one critisim is it needs more emotional involvement. Harry didn't even register an emotion when finding out he was in his parent's time. Also, he wouldn't just spill his guts to Dumbledore about Sirius like that. And no offense but i laughed at the OWL scores you gave him now that we know the real ones.

Dumbledore is way older than Riddle. In CoS he was a teacher (in Riddles' memory) Therefore he's at least 20 years older than Riddle. Although I'm pretty sure he's at least 50 years older then Riddle, I think it mentions that somewhere in OotP. . . .

so that you can give your reponse

I wants to know if it etait possible to translate your fanfiction into French

I've read your story just now. And i loved it! It's great. You did a very good job on the ending!

Thanks for posting this.

Yup it's impossible to deny it. This story is great and has helped greatly to satisfy my hunger for time travel fics. Amazing fic without a doubt :) :)

That was great! I can't wait to read more!

That was a bloody brilliant story! I especially liked the ending! Well done!

I really like this story very much.

Dear BlueGryphon,

I really like you story „Harry and the Marauders“ and I would like to translate it into Czech. Could I have your permission? Of course I will give a link to your original in my translation and I will send you a link of my work as soon as it will be posted.

I am looking forward to your answer. (You can send it here: )

Your Lily of the valley CZ

i sorta get sorta dont ur ending but it was good!

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