That was really kind of sad... but a good story anyway.

So sad, Ash is dead, hmm I wonder if that means team rocket got his Pikachu, hehehehehee!

I loved it, though I do like Misty x Ash pairings more than Misty x Rudy, it was still really good!

I can't say that I love it because it's been 2 years since I liked pokemon but I can say that the way you portrayed the characters brought me to like this fic because I lost interest in this anime long ago.

That was really great! But one thing...Why is Ash dead? I mean, he's like the best character and he's my favorite! But...other than that...it was great!

even in pokemon you are incredible !

what kind of a person are u?(i mean wow!)

MY FAVORITE AUTHOR! KEEP IT UP (i love it when i say that!)

It's beautiful. Just between u & me, if Ash doesn't notice her soon, she'd better go back2 Rudy. Atleast he cares about is a really good piece of work.

MARVILIUS!

really sweet, I really liked it!
pika pika pikachu!
happy holidays