oh, that was good. ok, strong rachel, don't cry.

Aw... that was sad. but good. Love clay aiken and the song really fit in there. good job

aw good song fic. I know the Clay Aiken song and I think you matched it really well with this story. now I'm off to read your other stories :)
P.S.tHANKS 4 REVIEWIN MINE ;)

Aww, poor Spike. He deserves a lot better. I just wanna give him a big hug. And who is that other reviewer cause I'm ready to beat that person up. Spike is not a bastard. And whoever thinks that are retards. Blah to them anyway. So forget that person. This was a well written fic.

Well, of course he's invisible! He's a vampire! He let Drusilla bite his throat out in a dirty alley. He saw her face and knew he was facing an ugly death or worse. He could have screamed, fought or tried to run. But he didn't. He let her kill him and he became a bloodsucker forever putting himself beyond the pale in human affairs. Now he latched onto a human female and a Slayer, no less, and he mopes because he's invisible to her. Then when he tries to get romantic, his idea is to chain her to a wall and threaten to sic his ex on her. What a bastard.
Your ficlet tells why Spuffy should never have been allowed to happen. Don't apologize for the ending; it's right on target.