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AceCade
2008-08-25
ch 1,
abuseSweet Prelude!
And btw, I love the title you picked.
-AceCade
trevia0123
2008-07-06
ch 1,
abuselove this story
xbbygirl
2006-12-16
ch 20,
abuseawh that was such a great story!
great job on it!
Rogue21493
2006-12-01
ch 20,
abuseNice! I really liked it! I am now off to read the sequel!
Anna
2005-07-18
ch 7, anon.
abuseAre you German? I saw that one of your author's notes is in German so i was just wondering^^ (I'm German, too ;) ) I loved the story so far
RiNgLeS
2005-02-18
ch 20,
abuseHey, I love this story, I've been reading it for a while now, and I'm so sorry that I've never bothered to review, I know how much it sucks though when you have people reading and not review! lol So I'm terribly sorry for doing that! I always meant to reaview after every chapter, and I never got around to it! :S

I absolutely adored Spike, oh everything about him! He was gorgeous! I really loved all of Lilly's special 'family!'I loved Lilly, her character was really really well done, and you captured everyone else brilliantly! :D There's been a few 'Brian's sister' stories, but personally, I think that this one is by far the best, the depth and well, just everything was so much better than any other I've ever read before! You've done a superb job on this, and I can't wait to get to read that sequel, which I might just do now, and I'll be sure to REVIEW after EVERY chapter! :D
Great work! :D
Peace out...

RiNgLeS
Stac
2005-01-29
ch 18, anon.
abuseI am reading your story and loving it. You are doing a great job with it. I just thought you might like to know the name of the hospital you have for where Lilly was born is not the actual name of the hospital in Barstow. The name of the hospital is Barstow Community Hospital. The only reason I know that for sure is that is where my daughter was born. Off to finish the story and start the sequel.
elohcin
2005-01-10
ch 20,
abuseThis story rocks! It stays true to the oringal characters. Something that not many writers due. Hse did a GREAT job interfining her made-up story with the real movie. Making the story flow with the movie parts. This story is the BOMB!
WalkersSkyline
2005-01-04
ch 8,
abuseGREAT STORY! I 'M LOVING IT!
Kate
2005-01-03
ch 20, anon.
abuseHi Djaly!
I thought your ending was fantastic! Well Done, Sorry I didn’t reply earlier but my email address isn’t working at the moment so I’ll have to tell you with a review. If my e-mail address stats working again soon then I’ll send you a more detailed review but I only have a few minutes now! You really finished off the story well and you did it so that you can start a sequel if you want(which I definitely think you should and support you entirely!), but at the same time you can leave it if you think it will be too much pressure, ya know. You gave a brilliant insight as to how Lilly is changing for the better and growing up. I’m really happy with how you wrote the story as you took your time to think about it and write what you wanted. Some of the other fanfiction stories are too rushed and it makes them unrealistic as the authors don’t give time to think about how it will affect the rest of the story. I’ll say no names!
I’m so proud of the story and hope that we still stay in contact every once in a while even if you don’t do a sequel! Bye! Love Ya x
Kate!
P.S. Thanks for the individual thank you at the end and……..you’re welcome!
stardina
2004-12-26
ch 20, anon.
abusegreat job writing i loved the story and i think you should write the other one you got in mind.
stardina
2004-12-24
ch 1, anon.
abusethank you for updating its so good please update it soon. happy holidays everyone
maliek
2004-12-22
ch 17,
abuseLove what is going on! Doing a wonderful job! Keep it up:)
Stangchica2003
2004-12-22
ch 17,
abuseThis was good. whats going to happen next? will he kill her? will brian and roman get her back in time? where are you going with this? keep goign and write more soon.
Padfoot's Bitch
2004-12-21
ch 17,
abuseI would like to compliment you on your superb English. You have better grammar and spelling than most native speakers of the English language. It's quite refreshing to read a story and not be trying to figure out if the person is totally incompentent or are simply too lazy to click 'Spell Check' when writing. Keep up the good work!
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