ONCE AGAIN ORLANDO BLOOM IS SO FIT HE HAS DA BODY OF A GOD AND DA FACE OF AN ANGEL AND WEN I C HIS EYES I MELT I MEAN 4 GET DAVID BEKHAM OR USHER ORLANDO IS WEL GORGEOUS I WUD LOVE 2 MEET HIM 1 DAY AND IF HE EVA READS DIS GUD LUK WID UR CAREER AND U R SO FIT! ( I FINK U GET DA MESSAGE!)

Loved it!
You captured Will's feelings very well.

Kaybee! How absolutely wonderful! I could just see Will standing there, just know it was *him* doing that. I'm very proud of you, darling, and I'll have you know that this is the first non-Star Wars fic I have read and enjoyed in a long time. Who knows, maybe I'll write a PotC fic one day...

It looks good- update soon!

AH!AH!
when do we get more?
Ib need more!
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