Sweet! nice story! update soon!

@_@ that was an extremely odd and yet strangely successful fic. I liked Beth Ann's overblown, pseudo elegant style and something about the repetition of 'Major Brian Torrent' was extremely entertaining. It was nice to see a crazy character who's not your normal run-of-the-mill crazy character (if you follow) so congrats on being original at least!

Wow. This is just...wow...I can honestly say I've never been this taken back by a fanfiction. Granted, I'm a bit confused, but that's all right.
This was SO funny. You've done a great job (esp. due to the genre of this fic) of keeping all the Akira characters in character. Kaneda, Yama, Kai...I can hear them all say their dialouge. You've also captured the world of Neo-Tokyo rather well, despite the humorous spice you've added to it. I felt bad for poor William McKay and am curious to find out about this Major Brian Torrent character.
Yet, Beth Ann Smith stole the show. She was just...hilarious. Words cannot even described how hard I laughed hysterically throughout reading this. I've never encountered such a unique and off-the-wall character that was, at the same time, strangely three-dimensional. She almost comes across as the anti-Mary Sue. Moreover, your prose is just phenomenal and just brings Beth Ann to life. You've really created a vivid tone and personality for her (in all it's humorous splendor) that is just terrific! I can't wait to see where her journey takes her next and how she'll react to whatever else awaits her in the world of Akira. I'd also like to read your original work, just to see a bit more of Beth Ann in action.
Oh, and by the way, if you don't already know, THIS IS HYSTERICAL! LOLOLOLOL!