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Isolde Eris
2007-11-01 . chapter 20
Great story i really loved it!
Someone important
2007-10-19 . chapter 5
\\"Really? Do you want to marry me that much?"\\

Oh please ... who doesn't want to marry Seto that much !
Blue-eyed Angel
2007-03-25 . chapter 20
Aw(sob)this story is so awesome! Cool ending to!
Sango A.R
2006-08-26 . chapter 20
loved it!
EtoileCyberPrima
2006-06-10 . chapter 20
LOL!! It's like Mokuba's in love with spagetti
DivineQueenYeiweh
2005-12-31 . chapter 1
well done, this is going on my fav. list!
Tortured Hylian Soul
2005-12-17 . chapter 1
Hiya! I have just become a member on the 16th, but I have read your stories long before this. I must say, you are one of the better authors on this site. My favorite story of yours so far is The Mystical Ocarina, but this is awesome!^_^ I have a request. Can you have a ZeLink story with an Anastasia twist? I've tried writing it, but my computer won't let me.? 0_o I don't know either. Please!
wing
2005-11-08 . chapter 13
kind made yami stupid.
V. Jane.
2005-08-18 . chapter 19
this is TOO coincidential. WAY too coincidential. hello? people can have similar hands/arms you know! THINK! anyway, this is good. but still...could have more improvements. might i mention that seto is ooc?

but i love the idea anyway, so this fic is all good.
V. Jane.
2005-08-18 . chapter 10
wow. this is good. but everything falls into place too perfectly. there should be a bit of a conflict, like if they slip up and someone notices. make it realistic.

otherwise, good job.
omasuoniwabanshi
2005-07-25 . chapter 20
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. You managed to 'fix' everything I felt was lacking in the anime series. Pegasus was happily married to his beloved Cecelia, Seto and Mokuba had parents that loved them, Dark Magician and Dark Magician girl FINALLY got engaged, and Seto found someone to love. (I love that pairing!) I really liked the last chapter's wedding madness, and all the 'late reactions'.
Thanks for reviewing my story! I must admit you've got a far better grasp of the card game than I ever could.
Your story was great and lots of fun to read!
shanichan11
2005-07-14 . chapter 20
OMG! THIS IS ONE OF MY FAV STORIES! I LUV IT! hope to read more of ur stories! ^^
shanichan11
2005-07-13 . chapter 6
aw! its so sweet! i completely luv the cinderella idea!
Lady Gaara 69
2005-04-16 . chapter 20
I really love this story, especially chapter 15 where Serenity shocks Seto by winning. And this chapter, I was waiting for when you would reveal that Serenity was the two other girls Seto kept thinking about. I thought you would have revealed that info earlier on, but you did it at the right time. Their marriage ceremony was defintely different. I liked how you made it humorous. You just had to go and confuse Seto even more, during DMG's officiation with the things she said. I also liked how Seto realized in the end that he only wanted Serenity and not her aliases, who he thought were two other women. Excellent job.
Rajalily
2005-03-31 . chapter 20
holy friggin' shit that was like the best story on i swear that was so good. omg you hav awesome potential yay!
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