What a treasure this chapter was :D!! And what an awesome day! My three favorite authors (you, of course, being one of them) all updated on the same day; what a surprise it was for the inbox :)! I find no errors in this piece, it's all good! As for the lettuce Link ate...ew, haha! Great work!

--evanesced-twilight04

Eh? Hehehaha? O.o

So this is an answer to the question 'what's the ten-second rule?'?

I couldn't help but squirm in my seat while Tetra was being chased by the spiders. I felt like Tetra for a few moments, there! I'm diggin' the ending, too! It was clean and simple, but tied up the story very well! I'm glad you kept going with this collection of oneshots, I love it!

--evanesced

*in little corner* make the spiders go away make the spiders go away make the spiders go away...what? i really do have archnophobia! dont mock me! anyways it was a good chapter.

Have I mentioned recently that I love your writing to death lately?

I laughed!

Excellent chapter.

I suspect that from now on Tetra might share his feelings about spiders...

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Haha, Tetra could have been baby spiders' lunch. Really entertaining chapter. ^^

Now, hopefully a update will come soon of NSS before I forget what the story's about. Maybe I'll read it again when I have time. Anyway, good job.

Been looking forward to more stuff from Achitka!

Very nice. Short, sweet, and smart combat. Tetra getting webbed brought to mind probably the only episode of the Zelda cartoon I ever saw on TV, years and years ago.

dude, lol i like ur stories! i just realized something, my collection of Digimon oneshots (Rukato of course!) is the same name as yours. sorry bout that, didnt know u had the same titel name...

...Yah. Nice.

And yah, I'm basically rereading NSaS, since I haven't very many clues as to what is happening. Thus, no more reviews. But one will come. Oh yes, it will come.

lol That was funny. I liked that one a lot. Keep on writing more like that. *nod*

That was a great ending, seriously! It all built up to that last line "And end my pain"! Very nice work! This piece really shows that while darkness can inflict many pains, there are possibly even greater pains within that very darkness, and the selfishness it's willing to commit, just to end that pain...I'm trying to be philosophical, thanks for bearing with me, haha XD! But really, I loved this poem so much!

--evanesced-twilight04

Hah, that made me laugh.

You just gotta love that Niko :)! The dialogue was so natural, and the story was short and sweet. Great work! Let's hope that Tetra lightens up on the guys XD!
Loved it!

--evanesced-twilight04