Not bad not bad at all!! That was very good. Just a note=Goku may act like a 10 year old, and even look like one but it's listed that he's 18...the pairing's still creepy though. Anywho good job on the story ^^

Please continue!

i practictly obsess over dragons but i never would have thought of Hakuryu having a human form. THATS PURE F*ING GENIOUS!?!? Please write more stories!
child molestation is wrong, no questions asked, but i think Goku is 18 so he's legally an adult, he only acts like a kid. But Sanzo is 23 so thats a five year age difference...ok so it probebly would be better if Goku was 19 or 20, but with true love stuff age doesn't really matter.
Please don't send any nasty e-mails!

I'm very sorry, and I know that child molestation is not a matter to be taken lightly, but I truely do not see Goku as a child. Please don't flame me, but if you think about it, Goku waited 500 or so years for Sanzo, which technically makes Sanzo more of a child than Goku. Although he acts like a kid, he's pretty old.
Anyway, off of that subject and on to the compliments! I actually liked this pairing, even though I'm usually a devout lover of Sanzo/Goku (Gomen nasai) This was very well written and I liked how you described Hakuryu, even though if he had a human form I would probably alter the hair colour.
I have to go, but I'd love to read another chapter

*Chuckle* Very ammusing.Hakuryu,as you said,is very exotic,makes me want to have hi myself.The lemon was sweet,just the way i like it.You should post it up on mediaminer.org,since they didn't delete their NC17 fics.Anyways,great fic.,do you have more similar to this? I think i'm going to check now.
Ja ne!
Harika Huynh

I WANT MORE! I really like this idea.

Not that this wasn't an interesting concept, but Sanzo and Goku is not child molestion but really two consenting adults since Goku has about 500 years give or take a couple over Sanzo. NO offense, though.

just to let you know, Hakuryuu has a human form. He was a war leader in heaven before being re-encarnated into a dradon.

I LOVE IT! WRITE A SEQUEL, PLEASE! The idea was just... Perfect! So original, different, it was really well-written... I LOVE IT!
About Goku, I agree with you, I dun really see him WITH sanzo, I've the same problem (albeit I can easilly imagine him having kind of a puppy-love, crush toward the blond man.). But if you want to have him with someone in shounen Aï, he would be good with Nataku...

Good writing and fun lemon.
Problem is...I can't imagine Sanzo actually behaving like that with someone he's just met after going through all those experiences with people who are not what they seem. Sanzo is usually the most cautious, standoffish member of the group.
Oh, and just to let you know: Goku is actually eighteen. You can go to the official site and read it for yourself if you don't believe me. Yeah, he definitely behaves like a five year-old though!

I agree if Hakuryu can into a Jeep then why cant he trun human. And the pairing was pretty cool. I hope others read this story and do other storys like this.

Dunno...
+: i've never seen such pairing written yet. Interesting.
-: Well.. I somehow can't make myself believe in this. It doesn't seem real.

Wow! That's good! An interesting new twist on things! Nice work.
I would like to mention that in the second season of the series we see the god that is Hakkyruu as a vaguely scaley, red eyed, white haired general who is senior to Kenren (Goyjo). I think it will be interesting so see how you develop that idea because the general Hakkyruu is very different than the other human looking gods. Hence the question, "Where, and who, are the dragon poeple?"