the story was good, but, what is FIN? Does it mean finished?

Kal0:Damnit my head hurts

Summer: I want a knuxouge sequal out of you mister!

Im sorry but when you said there was a sad chapter i got kind of disapionted becuase i like realy sad stories like the happiness in slavery you need to read it its so cool.No affence but 6/20

cinda

sequal sequal sequal!

19/20! I LOVE this story! The one point missing was because of romance, but it's just my taste, not yours!

Well, it isn't exactly sad. Of course if you're very sentimental, it is. But that's the thing. I'm not exactly sentimental.

Yes. I knew it. But it's still one of the BEST stories I've ever read!

Uh oh...I think I know what the manual said...

I'm still very impressed! Pretty good!

That was pretty good! Again! I think Chapter 6 might be slighty romantic, but that's fine. Oh, and LOVE THE SHORT CHAPTERS! Beleive it or not, I am one of the few that like short chapters.

Again, that was pretty good! Not as funny, but still good! This one's on my faves list!

U my friend, are a great author. I LOVED that chapter!
Sort of crude with James not having any clothes on; although an animal. Oh, well. Good job.

XD This is rich XD

Funny!

I'd give it a 8/20 because you could give the story more description and stuff. The storyy seems like it was written to finish it. but it was pretty good nontheless.