hi,
your stories along this concept are great...hurry up and add another set of chapters to this idea ...pls

I'd like to learn more about Rachel and Jamie and all of the Kents after this one...especially w/ Perry knowing the truth.

I love this story!

Wow! I just finished reading this story, as well as your other Lois and Clark fics, and they are excellent! Rachel is such a wonderful character, and Lois and Clark make great parents the way you portray them! I hope you continue with these characters, your stories are so enjoyable!

Wow! I found your stories by accident, but boy am i glad i did!! I loved Little girl lost and Innoncence Lost - they were so good i've spent every spare moment on the net for the past three days!

Keep writing, because you obviously love it hand have a tlent for it!

Wonderful. A great sequel to Little Girl Lost. Loved the integration of Timmy and Rachel's connection to her brother Jamie. I must admit I've been personally affected by your stories. I've battled a short fuse and I'm a father to an 8 month old. Watching Clark as a father figure has reminded me how important my influence is and how much of a blessing my daughter is in my life. I look forward to any other episodes you write. Keep up the good work!

aww, amazing finish! loved it! i really hope there IS gonna be more... like maybe show how everyone's doing a few years later or something. uhh, i dunno; just a suggestion. anyway, great story! :D

Great ending! I couldn't belive Megan--so twisted. I feel so bad for her parents. I really enjoyed reading this story. It was very well written. I was surprised to find out that Parry knew, but it does make sense. It would certianly explain why Clark still has a job after all those years of leaving unannounced all the time. Again, wonderful job with this story. I look forward to reading any other stories that you may write!

You're doing such a wonderful job with this story! You capture emotions wonderfully--in Rachel and Timmy especially. I really don't like Timmy, but I understand why he does what he does--you made that point very clear. Keep up the great work; I look forward to reading more!

yay! you've updated! woo-hoo! great chapter :)

I'm so glad that you updated! You're doing a wonderful job with this story. Keep up the great work; I look forward to the next chapter!

I love it! Your a good writer update soon. I also like the story b/f this one.

I love this story or series of stories about Rachel, but you take forever in posting more. Please post sooner. Not trying to be mean, just really like this story and would love to read more of it. Do you post this story somewhere else too? e-mail me at hunter_girl_18@msn.com if you do please.

ok It's not like I don't know where your headed wih the murder thing put hey you may suprise me. And I'm interested in the whole Timmy situatuion, from the last story I got the idea that he wasn't very nice to rachel and would probably just bring back more bad memories of her Papa Gary and make her miserable. Unless he's killed like the other little boys sorry thinking outloud or in print whatever just please finish it I'm hooked.

yey! i'm glad u decided to write again despite the fact that you said you were on the hiatus...YEY!! ur so talented i'm glad you decided to update! I got so excited when i saw it! its such a great chapter too! continue soon :D