i loved it so sweet and adorable

I want to hug and cuddle this fanfic! And it's also awefully ironic that I found this on November 13th. :P
Most of all, it's grammactically correct.
Some things wrong with your grammar- You're using periods to end a sentence in quotations. The problem with that is you're not suppose to use ending makrs in a quotation, unless it'sa question or something said with exclamation-point values.

The young authoress began to lecture,"You, blue-eyed-suichi, who I believe I've read stories from before, should try following this example,". She pauses, to give you time to reflect on what she typed. "Notice where the period is placed? That's becuase periods are used to end a sentence. You can use periods in the middle of quotations, however, if you don't feel it nessesary to add a break into the middle of the speaker's line," Vaxl explained, as kindly as she could.

"Now, I have no idea why, but the wacks who invented our grammar thought it'd be weird if we used our periods at the end of a quote!" She yelled in a venting tone, "But it's probably becuase that since it's not part of the sentence, but rather something seperated to make writing easier. I think that's it, but you could object, right?". The 8th grader pulls down a chart that explains that no matter what punctuation was used in a sentence, you always put a period (Or the others) at the end of a sentence, no matter if a sentence was just ended in a quote. As said earlier, the quote isn't much part of a sentence.

One thing, it's acceptable for Kuwabara or Yusuke to say this, as they don't really give a damn about grammar, but when you said, "Yukina and I", that's not right, either. With those and- (noun/pronoun), you have to be careful. Example: "Bob and I are going to the store," wouldn't be correct becuase saying "I are going to the store," wouldn't make sense, would it? Instead, you should try "Yukina and me," if Kuwabara was trying to be grammactically correct.

I hope my tips helped- Good luck! Cya!

Wow... I loved this fic. It was so sweet and so happy! I loved it! Thank you for writing it! Well I gotta run. Ja ne!

Aw...I really luv'd it. It's so cute and no matter how many times I read Kurama and Botan pairing I never get bored. They really do seem perfect for each other. And I really like you writing, this is the second story that I've read from you and I have to say that you are one of my favorite authors. And I really want to read more of After the Fall. =D

Alright.. So I guess I'm like, 2 years late to reviewing. Still, reviewing is good. So that's what I'm doing.

That... was... so.. amazing! You wrote it extremely well! And it's so sweet it made me feel like melting. ^^ It was very realistic, in character, and... beautiful! I absolutely loved it. :) You have some fantasimus talent. Great, GREAT, job!

I just had to tell you that this story was the first yyh, kuramaxbotan fanfic that i ever read. it was the gateway that led to my loving of this fanbased couple. you know the how to guide them together and make sure that they never drift apart. i really have to thank you, cuz if it weren't for u, i would have been missing out on all of the other great k and b fanfics out there.

oh my gosh. this is the most awesome K/B story that i have ever ever read. wow. i think i know now why one of my friends thinks so highly of you. it is very well written. you certainly don't need any tips on writing. if anyone needs it it's me. i have one story i decided to write and i avoid any writing in school like the plaque. i have no clue what compelled me to put it on but oh wel *sighs*. ack! what am i doing? *mentally smacks self* i am rambling. awesome job keep writing. kurama and botan are so sweet. i love em. ok i am pretty sure that u r a guy and i don't know you but oh well. *huggles* r u going to be writing more? pretty please?

AW! okay got that out of my systme. great fic!

I LOVE do you hear me LOVE this story and the couple too it is so sweet how Kurama and Botan love each other yet try to hide it you keep up the good work ok

I loved it... It was beautiful... Just the fluff I needed to cheer me up! Thank you for writting this story!

hey jd! its me again. man, ur such a good writer. i luved youre story. actually i like all your fics, well at least all the ones i red so far. this 1 was good though real good. it was very nice at the end. how can you stay up til 2:30!? i only stay up that late at sleepovers. oh well. hurry up and update for after the fall will ya. the only thing that i can find wrong with your fic is that there was no hiei. later

Hello! Very good fic! Really good! Please, go see my fic, too! Forever and now! And review!

man girl! that is one AWSOME lil love story u got there. i was just waiting for hieie to make some kind of apperance though. *sigh* oh well, i guess it was better w/out him this time. i really lke how u captured Kurama's characture, along w Botan's... for some reaso, after a while, every body makes her forget her shyness and what not, and make her become seriously aggressive... i'm glad u were different though! it made the story a heck of a lot beter! ^_^

Dude. You rock hardcore! You're one of the best authors I've come across so far! I wish I was half the writer you were! Keep up the good work!

-GF

im generally not a mushy person...really, im not. but...this HAD to be THE cutest story i have ever read! melted me right into a tiny little puddle on the floor! ^_^ and i hope i can find the time to read your other K/B story sometime soon, because you're an exceptional writer! (better than most, i must say =^.^=)