 Cristina 2009-08-16 . chapter 17 Please do update when you get the chance. :)
This is afterall one of the best AkuJack fanfics ever... And probably one of the last ones too. |
 RosutoKi-chan 2009-06-11 . chapter 17*Smirk* Aku was cheaking Jack out the ENTIRE Kata and didn't cover it up that well. If I was Samurai Jack, wasn't stressed out, feeling weary, thinking of a million problems at once, I'd probably see through that cover-up. No offense, but the ending was COMPLETELY out of Jack's character. Actually, in the next one, it would be VERY entertaining if he caught Aku with a bad cover-up during a moment like that. XD I can picture it, seriously, and Aku blushing in human form denying it all! XD TOO FUNNY! Now, I need to go on a chocolate hunt! Make sure to update it, I'm not a person of waiting you know!
Aku: Like you've every been, now get off the computer! I need to look something up!
Ki-chan: Sure! *Gives labtop to Aku*
Aku: *Reads fanfiction* WHAT IS THIS?!
Ki-chan: A YAOI FANFIC! :D
Aku: O_O THIS! THISS! WHO CREATED THIS!?
Ki-chan: Don't know but I like it!
Aku: Did it ever occur to you that THIS will never happen . . . EVER!
Jack: *Walks in* AKU! *Takes out sword*
Ki-chan: HOLD IT NINJA BOY! *Sword poofs away* Let's have some cake first! :D
Jack: MY KANTA?! Who are you?
Aku: Just give up, trust me, the moment you wandered here, you got trapped in her world. Help me . . . She's holding me against my-
Ki-chan: EH HEM! *Eyes turn red* Do you really want to finish that sentence?
Aku: O_O No . . .
Ki-chan: GOOD DEMON! :D
Jack: O_O . . . Is it me, or did I just witness Aku being tamed by this girl?
Ki-chan: *Puts colar on Jack* YAY NEW PET!
Jack: I AM NO PET OF YOURS! *Walks to the exit and is shocked*
Ki-chan: SURPRISE! IT SHOCKS! :D
Aku: The moment you walked in here, you were to face your doom with this girl along with me. How . . . fitting . . .
Jack: *Snatches labtop* Maybe I can use this contraption to . . . *Reads fanfiction* O_O . . . Aku I didn't know you felt this way . . .
Aku: I DIDN'T LOOK IT UP! IT WAS THAT GIRL! *Points to Ki-chan*
Jack: For some reason I highly doubt it . . .
Aku: I'm serious!
Ki-chan: Eh hee hee . . . *Aku glares* What? I didn't PLAN that now didn't I?
Aku: I DID NOT I SWEAR!
Jack: STAY AWAY FROM ME YOU PERVERT! *Something you never expect Jack to say Neh?*
Ki-chan: AND . . .
CUT! END OF ROLE PLAY! |
 HIH Imaginary Friend 2008-09-08 . chapter 17 Let me make something clear so you can understand how much I REALLY want you to finish this story. I have been reading fanfiction ever since I was 13 yrs. old, I am now 20 and THIS IS THE FIRST REVIEW I HAVE EVER GIVEN IN ALL THAT TIME! I have search everywhere for Jack/Aku and your story is by far the VERY BEST I HAVE EVER READ! Good Plot, Good relationship dynamics, good everything! So with that I beg you, PLEASE FINISH THE STORY! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! Please! Ah-ah Thank You sor your time. |
 Winkaku 2008-08-30 . chapter 17Dude!
I love it; your use of words and mythology in a series so starved of it's own origin is a magic in and of itself!
Please continue this story, your words have ruined me for all others.
The story is a multi-layered conundrum strung together with the fluid perfection of a master; the fates themselves would roil in envy of this talent. Your keen use of the many layers you design reflects the very complexity of the characters whom you depict in a way so potent I could cry; truly this demon of a story is a wonder of countless faces to tease the mind! |
 kinatsurune 2008-08-01 . chapter 17wow, this is so interesting! Of course I had to read this, curious to see how you would make a relationship between Jack and Aku work, but I never expected it to actually make sense to me! Very clever twist, for Jack to fall victim to his own compassion in the face of an injured opponent, even one as threatening as Aku. Although the last thing Aku has said in this chapter is very characteristic of him, somehow I am still hoping he'll reciprocate Jack's feelings, as twisted as that may seem. Keep up the GREAT work and I really hope you update soon, as I am EXTREMELY curious how this is going to turn out! |
 EriksBlue 2008-07-24 . chapter 17plz update soon i love this story. also add more yaoi thx with love |
 The Metal Cervidae 2008-05-12 . chapter 17Hey, hey.
I love you. Yeah, I still love you. You should update again sometime, y'know? |
 VoicesInTheWalls 2008-04-07 . chapter 17OMG! This story is so awsome. I love it bunches. Please update soon! ^_^ |
 Altebar 2008-04-01 . chapter 17Undoubtedly one of the best fanfic in all , and I have read a lot of them. The plot is interesting, there's a lot of mistery and the protagonists are, not only in character, but even more deep than the original ones. A wonderfull work, I'm jelaus. :)
Please, update soon. |
 Eriks 2008-01-10 . chapter 17 plz update i wont to see what happens next between aku and jack |
 Doxi Para Doxi 2007-12-02 . chapter 17 Im really enjoying this. And that deer joke cracked me up. I did always wonder what those things were...I understand why it takes so long to update. Other things to do, laziness, etc., All my writing is on hold while I finish colege applications and my essays. Only 2 thank god! |
 EriksBlue 2007-08-16 . chapter 1 plz add a new chapter |
 kanna2415 2007-08-01 . chapter 17wow, this is such a good story (plus its aku/jack :D)!! is the story complete or are there more chapters? |
 PriestessHelene 2007-07-03 . chapter 17Oh snap! I hadn't caught with this story in a while. I think the twist and turns you give the charaters is awesome. The emotions run deep between they could'v have been brothers. The drescriptions in the areas you have the charaters travel is very good even the people who they interact with. Really great work. Good and Evil is simply no black nor white anymore. |
 Saria29 2007-06-22 . chapter 17 Oh my god. I love this. This chapter was so...I don't know, intriguing, and it got even better at the end.
Blah, I can't wait for more. |