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| Ko nan ChakaZo. 2007-04-18 ch 3, | abuseRead it again. Still funny. :D |
| Myn MacDork 2007-03-24 ch 3, anon. | abuseROFLMAO!! Why am I hungrey all of the sudden... Please write more! :D I have one question, though. Why did Daniel and Teal'c fall asleep? Was it just random humor? LOL |
| jesphoenix05 2004-11-30 ch 3, | abuseThis is strange... What were you on and can i have some? ;-) |
| Simpleinsanity 2004-09-16 ch 3, | abuseI love this story. it is so funny. please update soon. i want to keep on reading this. ^_^ |
| Lady of Nimrodel 2004-01-28 ch 3, | abuseDude that was so radical! We all knew that Jack was dumb but is he realy #that# dumb? Makes you wonder just how dumb he is... as dumd as me?? Well no I am smart for a blonde, so there! Annyways, love your story #Mwa#, you gotta write more and publish your chapters more often, because it ** me off somethin awfull when there are no new chapters in a story! I wanna scream and yell and rip out my hair... well scream and yell anyways!!So hurry up and... oh no! There... look out behind you!! #Screams# Ha, made you look you diry chook! Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha h ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha har! I do not like green eggs and ham i do not like them Sam i am!1 |
| Dimac99 2004-01-27 ch 3, | abuseSupremely silly and very enjoyable! I particularly like the final line, alluding to one of Jack's favourite movies... |
| happy molecule 2004-01-27 ch 3, | abuseHehehehehehehy! "Fire at will" General Hammond commanded with a nod, * In the distance * Will "No" >BOM< * Back at some missile base * "Um, General..don't you mean fire at the Cheese-arians?" Sam questioned "Yes, right, them too." - Hammond ehehehehe :) i couldnt stop laughing at this! this is great :) |
| happy molecule 2004-01-27 ch 1, | abuseyay! go the cheese! |
| Smego Baggins 2004-01-27 ch 3, | abuseIs it just me or was Jack swaped around with a 5 year old? Love the ‘why’ questions, never thought I'd see it in a militry fic. And ‘fire at Will’. Never saw that one coming. So, will the cheese-arian’s try to get revenge . . . AGAIN? Smeg |
| Gimli2003 2004-01-26 ch 3, | abuseM, chesse...*drol*- Uh, i mean, great story, hilarious, please continue, WANT MORE CHEESE! |
| custardpringle 2004-01-26 ch 3, | abuseYou have a sick and twiste mind. Therefore, you are my hero. hee. |
| Elvellon 2004-01-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay! Remind me to lock my bedroom door next time you come over! lol Very strange...but I guess I can't talk! :D Oh, and you need to put a 'd' on Hammon! lol |
| Smego Baggins 2004-01-07 ch 2, | abuseLove the ant song and the cannibalistic Jack-eating cheese man. But this fic isn’t going to knock me off of the that sweet sweet dairy product. |
| custardpringle 2004-01-03 ch 2, | abuseThis is just hysterical. Words cannot describe the incredible difficulty I am having staying on my chair becasue I'm laughing so hard. Please write more. |
| Smego Baggins 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abuseOMG That was so fricken funny!! Fave lines? 1) This is MOTSARELLA! This man is TASTY 2) ICE PACKS NOW! HES GOING OFF HERE!! Oh and we’re at war with cheese? Let me rephrase that TASTY cheese? Let me get the biscuits out and munch while the cheese crunch. Memo to the team: Don't let Jack anywhere NEAR the cheese Army. |