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wolfhorse 2004-01-05 ch 3, anon.	abuseI really don't know what to say. This is amazing. Shalimar's reaction seems perfectly natural for her character. I wish you'd keep going with it.
LoveConquers 2004-01-04 ch 3,	abuseWow, the detail in this chapter is amazing. I don't think you painted Shalimar too "soppy" at all! If you think about it, the only times we've ever seen her cry is when someone has died, even if she did not know them very well. She feels very deeply to people she attaches herself to, and that is reflected very well in this chapter. Great job!! Can't wait to read more of your work!
canadian-chic14 2004-01-04 ch 3, anon.	abusehey Im really liking this stroy hope you continue as soon as possible. Ciao
LoveConquers 2003-12-28 ch 2,	abuseI love the idea of a whole chapter dedicated to another's point of view...especially poignant knowing that she becomes the victim. Very good attention to detail again! Thank you so much for adding this addition!!
Katianna 2003-12-23 ch 1, anon.	abuseAH! No! This reads like a teaser trailer. I REALLY want to see the whole film, but you're telling me it's not going to be shown... :( It's up to you I suppose, but I'd love a longer more detailed story and perhaps more on the afterwards too, shal's recovery
blackpanther2288 2003-12-23 ch 1,	abuseI honestly don't knw what to make of your story. I can't realy make ense of it but maibe a later chapter would explain it. Hope you get to write it.
LoveConquers 2003-12-22 ch 1,	abuseI can see why you like the ending as is, but I have to say, this is just too good to end now! So many possibilies to take this story, I hope you do add more! But if not, I still love this, very simple, yet deep and emotional at the same time--amazing! Thank you!
goldstranger 2003-12-22 ch 1,	abuseThis is no way in heck a one shot. Sounds too good just to stop it there!

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