 amaramichelle 2008-11-30 . chapter 3Way cool i hope you write some more id love to find out wat happens next |
 sailorminako 2007-07-09 . chapter 1This story is really nice, I liked how it was written, thanks for this story and please finish it, I want to know how it ends. |
 Aino Suishou 2005-10-21 . chapter 3 Hey, it's pretty good, although your story still contain some grammar errors. Of course, no offense. |
 SachiNyoko 2005-05-04 . chapter 3Kya, I love this story! It's wonderful, and I hope you update soon. ^_^ |
 Wind Pixie 2004-12-16 . chapter 3O.O wow I like it please conitune soon ^.^ |
 leeniie 2004-08-16 . chapter 3=D I haven't read a Minako fic in a long time! And what makes it better is its in MWPPs time! You're doing great! Update soon
Glitter Flutterby |
 Chibi Pyro Duo 2004-08-15 . chapter 3You ruined everything?? I'm asuming by the explosion Regulas was using something as target practice or Minako's powers exploded.
Good- You seem to have the characters right a least. That is a big feat for some authors, no you apprently.
Improve- You could go more into what each indivual character is thinking and feeling rather than them just saying words. Also facial expressions especially with the eyes, really do tell a lot about what a person is feeling.
Other than that little knit picky note I'd say the story is coming along I think I'm seeing a plot and what not. I hope that it doesn't take three more months to see the next chapter.
Duo-chan |
 Krolien 2004-03-02 . chapter 1 BRILLIANT! EXCELLENT! CONTINUE! |
 Serena & Servus luvur 2004-02-25 . chapter 1 This fic is okay. Continue becuase it has some potential and I really like it. k :):):):) |
 Caliowiel B 2003-12-26 . chapter 1Very Nice. Very nice indeed. Please continue! |
 Lady Wannabe 2003-12-25 . chapter 1 Oh! I love this!
Update soon!
Merry Christmas! |
 Sippi-Hippi 2003-12-23 . chapter 1 Oh I love this! Write some more pleaz! It's very interesting I've never seen a plot like this one before! Pleaz continue! |
 aquafina rain 2003-12-22 . chapter 1Hmm. Creative idea. Heh, Sirius and his three women... LIRL. Such a player that boy is... XDD Anywho, I was a tad upset when Artemis scared poor little Peteh... Really, he's just a pudgy, innocent boy! XDD Anywho, keep it up-I'm interested. |
 Aphrodite2 2003-12-22 . chapter 1interesting... very interesting... but I like it. Wonder whats going to happen, guess I will just have to wait and see...
Happy Writing! |