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Reviews For: Transifiguration: The Gryffindors' Misfortune
amaramichelle 2008-11-30 . chapter 3
Way cool i hope you write some more id love to find out wat happens next
sailorminako 2007-07-09 . chapter 1
This story is really nice, I liked how it was written, thanks for this story and please finish it, I want to know how it ends.
Aino Suishou 2005-10-21 . chapter 3
Hey, it's pretty good, although your story still contain some grammar errors. Of course, no offense.
SachiNyoko 2005-05-04 . chapter 3
Kya, I love this story! It's wonderful, and I hope you update soon. ^_^
Wind Pixie 2004-12-16 . chapter 3
O.O wow I like it please conitune soon ^.^
leeniie 2004-08-16 . chapter 3
=D I haven't read a Minako fic in a long time! And what makes it better is its in MWPPs time! You're doing great! Update soon
Glitter Flutterby
Chibi Pyro Duo 2004-08-15 . chapter 3
You ruined everything?? I'm asuming by the explosion Regulas was using something as target practice or Minako's powers exploded.

Good- You seem to have the characters right a least. That is a big feat for some authors, no you apprently.

Improve- You could go more into what each indivual character is thinking and feeling rather than them just saying words. Also facial expressions especially with the eyes, really do tell a lot about what a person is feeling.

Other than that little knit picky note I'd say the story is coming along I think I'm seeing a plot and what not. I hope that it doesn't take three more months to see the next chapter.

Duo-chan
Krolien 2004-03-02 . chapter 1
BRILLIANT! EXCELLENT! CONTINUE!
Serena & Servus luvur 2004-02-25 . chapter 1
This fic is okay. Continue becuase it has some potential and I really like it. k :):):):)
Caliowiel B 2003-12-26 . chapter 1
Very Nice. Very nice indeed. Please continue!
Lady Wannabe 2003-12-25 . chapter 1
Oh! I love this!
Update soon!

Merry Christmas!
Sippi-Hippi 2003-12-23 . chapter 1
Oh I love this! Write some more pleaz! It's very interesting I've never seen a plot like this one before! Pleaz continue!
aquafina rain 2003-12-22 . chapter 1
Hmm. Creative idea. Heh, Sirius and his three women... LIRL. Such a player that boy is... XDD Anywho, I was a tad upset when Artemis scared poor little Peteh... Really, he's just a pudgy, innocent boy! XDD Anywho, keep it up-I'm interested.
Aphrodite2 2003-12-22 . chapter 1
interesting... very interesting... but I like it. Wonder whats going to happen, guess I will just have to wait and see...
Happy Writing!
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