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| sailorminako 2007-07-09 ch 1,  | abuseThis story is really nice, I liked how it was written, thanks for this story and please finish it, I want to know how it ends. |
| Aino Suishou 2005-10-21 ch 3, anon. | abuseHey, it's pretty good, although your story still contain some grammar errors. Of course, no offense. |
| SachiNyoko 2005-05-04 ch 3, | abuseKya, I love this story! It's wonderful, and I hope you update soon. ^_^ |
| Wind Pixie 2004-12-16 ch 3, | abuseO.O wow I like it please conitune soon ^.^ |
| leeniie 2004-08-16 ch 3, | abuse=D I haven't read a Minako fic in a long time! And what makes it better is its in MWPPs time! You're doing great! Update soon Glitter Flutterby |
| Chibi Pyro Duo 2004-08-15 ch 3, | abuseYou ruined everything?? I'm asuming by the explosion Regulas was using something as target practice or Minako's powers exploded. Good- You seem to have the characters right a least. That is a big feat for some authors, no you apprently. Improve- You could go more into what each indivual character is thinking and feeling rather than them just saying words. Also facial expressions especially with the eyes, really do tell a lot about what a person is feeling. Other than that little knit picky note I'd say the story is coming along I think I'm seeing a plot and what not. I hope that it doesn't take three more months to see the next chapter. Duo-chan |
| Krolien 2004-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseBRILLIANT! EXCELLENT! CONTINUE! |
| Serena & Servus luvur 2004-02-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis fic is okay. Continue becuase it has some potential and I really like it. k :):):):) |
| Caliowiel B 2003-12-26 ch 1, | abuseVery Nice. Very nice indeed. Please continue! |
| Lady Wannabe 2003-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh! I love this! Update soon! Merry Christmas! |
| Sippi-Hippi 2003-12-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh I love this! Write some more pleaz! It's very interesting I've never seen a plot like this one before! Pleaz continue! |
| aquafina rain 2003-12-22 ch 1, | abuseHmm. Creative idea. Heh, Sirius and his three women... LIRL. Such a player that boy is... XDD Anywho, I was a tad upset when Artemis scared poor little Peteh... Really, he's just a pudgy, innocent boy! XDD Anywho, keep it up-I'm interested. |
| Aphrodite2 2003-12-22 ch 1, | abuseinteresting... very interesting... but I like it. Wonder whats going to happen, guess I will just have to wait and see... Happy Writing! |